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for Kagome's Paths

by kagehoshi

person Phelony
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written! It's hard to believe that you've written this story
so brilliantly, and not English as a first, or even second language. You
deserve many kudo's for that.

I almost didn't read this story, but my curiosity got the better of me.
I'm glad it did. Please update soon!
person Kurama'sFoxyMiko
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! That was great! I loved it so much. Although the part with the mer-people was a bit annoying... even though it's uderstandable that they've never seen human clothing before. Now I can't wait for next chapter. Hope you update again soon. And hey! If you want, I can draw a picture of Jareth and Kagome together (Intimate or not, that's up to you and your friend)

Well, Hope you update soon.
person kookookitty
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Kagome's Paths' is not updated in the movie catagory, so I was delighted to see it in the 'Inuyasha' catagory.

I am very impressed by your ability to use words to conjure up such a vivid portrayal of amazing raw emotion; buzzing like electricity around them... almost... palpable. There IS power in words!
As we, your readers, desperately cling to your every word, plummet to the sharp rocks of bitter reality when you withhold them... we struggle to our feet, our bruised and bloodied minds pleading, imploring, "Please update, please... please?"

Have a wonderful summer! Thank you for sharing your wonderful story.

ginny
person Kurama'sFoxyMiko
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! That was so Awesome! This had really caught my interest. Please, oh PLEASE update soon. I really want to read what happens.
person carzyasswhitegirl
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need to update. i love this story.put adult content in soon.
person Obaasan
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So any idea when this story willget updated?

I really would like to see how this ends.
person FanGirlInu
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Wright more soon. I can't wait to read more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person FanGrilInu
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update SOON Please.
person Audra
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* See? Told you I make typing mistakes!
person sara
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, take all the time you need to recover. release the stress that you don't need. i love your story and await the next time you revie. please take things easy. and put a smile on your face. it might just help.

:)