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I was wondering if I could have your e-mail address to nominate your story for an award?

I really like this story! I just got Labyrinth on DVD for Christmas (something I've been wanting every since I was little) so this story could not have came to my attention at a more wonderful time. Your spelling and grammar are both great. To shed some light on why English speaking people can't even write it very well, I would have to say it's because we spend so much time trying to shorten and mutilate the language. Children are now brought up with everyone speaking slang around them and not proper English. Most of them don't bother to pay attention in school to learn proper English, either that or they have bad teachers.

It annoys me to no end when I get flamed for correcting someone's spelling and/or grammar. If they don't want to improve they should not be writing at all. So I'm glad to find an author who wants constructive criticism. I do have to say that in my opinion Kagome is a little out of character. Some of the colorful words she's using make her sound more like Inuyasha than herself. But other than that I think the story is wonderful. I love your portrayal of Jareth. I hope you add another chapter soon.

I really like this story and can never find this pairing! Than you so much for writing it and I hope you update soon! When you update can you please e-mail me with the link?! PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!

i don't understand... to leave your readers hanging from a cliff, without crucial information, without continuing, without closure is a cruelty.
wonderful, well written, captivating...

healthy incentive to update... i am not above bribery >=P

chocolate coma
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~yummy!

please, please (nor am i above begging)

thank you,
ginny

Hey Kagehoshi,

I'm only sending this review because AFF.Net won't allow non-AFF.Net members to have the e-mail of the Authors/authoresses of the site.

I'm just wondering when you'll be able to update again and If I could have your email again? I'd really appreciate it. To send me the email and when you'll be able to update, you'll be able to find my email address at FanFiction.Net, under the Profile of Kurama'sFoxyMiko.

That's the only Fanfiction account I have. And The email is placed at the very bottom of the profile. Hope to hear from you soon.

*\ O /* Kagehoshi *\ O /*
(Dances a little Kagehoshi dance!)
Welcome back! Are you in Pennsylvania again? I'm in Pittsburgh, quite a distance away. Enjoy your school year, I hope all goes well for you!
I'm so happy that you are continuing this story, you are a truly gifted and talented author!

Thank you,
ginny

very very good so far, great crossover...please update!

Awsome please please update you you awesome awesome fanfic writer

I'm so happy you're keeping on with this, I really like it & am looking forward to more whenever you get the chance to update. Just as a point of interest I bought a Labyrinth manga today. It's all about Toby & while Sarah is in it briefly & mentioned several times it's mostly about Toby's misfortunes & adventures, by the end of the 1st book which is the 1 I got he's been named Jareth's heir.

I'm really, really enjoying this story. You are spot on with the great character reactions and emotions, this is a great read. Thanks for the author's note about clothes I didn't know that about uniforms. Hehe but getting Kagome into some Laura Croft shorty shorts is pretty sexy, and the mere-people are a nice addition. You can thank some twits in Britian for the whole no liquids on planes BS, I'm seriously thinking that a 4 day drive to visit my Mom in Minnesota for the holidays might be easier than all this flying grabage.