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for The Inutaisho Legacy

by penpaninu

person nina-chan
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oOoh kagome n inuyasha gettin it on.. again! lol hmm i wonder if shes gonna fall pregnant again O_O hmmmm.. newayz! loving the story as always!! keep it up *thumbz up* :D woo!!
person sAL
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was fast!

DA-YM!! Kags is quite the little nympho isnt she? well then again, if we all had our own inuyasha, wed be too. rin too, the girls like 14, 15, yea in those times it was acceptable but i mean...wow, i guess sessho can do that to a girl hunh.

and who is this new guy? this "youkai dignitary" as you have called him so far, and what the hell is his beef? and all thes other dicks calling my lil inu abominable and big inu a bastard!! we need to handle that shit, cuz that aint gonna fly! i dont think i like this new guy, but i cant wait to see what kind of problems he stirs up so inu and sessho can beat the bitches ass down!!!

and i must say, the uh, "mattress mambo" thing... yea, had me rollin'! dude, that was just so out of left field it was friggin genious! totally un expectd but fit in perfectly.

all in all, a very good chapter, cleverly titled and a little...not really suspensful... but i cant think of another word for it...so well just say that im gonna be thinking about it for a while, jus wondering what this "youkai dignitary" is up to. keep it up, the story is amazing!

sAL
person hanyou_swimmer
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I so remember that episode with Richard and Ross!! It was one of my favorites! lol. Another awesome update! But I don't think I like where your goin with this... NO ONE should try to hurt the baby! Oh and by the way the scene with Jaken was amazingly funny! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the next chappy!
person chanda
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, that was comical the brothers running into each other. I wonder who the new threat is? Hot lemon near the end.

Chanda
person sAL
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry, but i didnt realize that i started my review the same way as syko's, after i posted mine, i went and saw his/hers (i dunno, sorry) any way, i jus thought id point that out. sorry!!!!

sAL
person sAL
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea, i kno im like, mad, crazy late, but things have been goin onwith startin school and my dad gettin deployed, but here is your crack:

lets all say it togerher now....AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, its so cool that the brothers are getting along, it makes me get that really cheesey happy feeling and i cant help but smile as i read it. but man, sessho, you gotta have faith in kagome woman, shes tryin her best. i mean, its cool to prepare for the worst and all, seein as how its the responsible thing to do, but dont lose faith.

ok, good chap, short and sweet with a lil bit o sour, a most excelent combination. keep it up, cant wait for lucky chapter 13

sAL
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PENNY!!!!!!!! I'm Uber late O.O
You gotta start sending me reminders when you update.
I don't visit aff as much as I used to, so sometimes I
miss ya. Then I had a fashion show this weekend & one
of them bitches stole my favorite MAC brush...

*grumbles*

Okies, on with the review! 0.~

InuYasha's stomach twisted in hunger..that sounds so funny
to me. It's like that in my ghetto-fabulous household. Shit
like, Dayum, I be Howngray (yes, just the way it sounds) lol.
Except we have no imp... *sigh* A bitch gotta actually cook
a meal...

How did sesshy-sama roll up his sleeves? I mean...the one that
actually houses an arm has to be fucked. Does he do it with his
teeth? That would be a neat trick... (Oh & yeah, I'm reviewing
as I read!) Penny ur dead wrong, lmao. Why does Inu's arm
hafta be *slimly* muscled? *hahaha* You calling my boy boney?

Awwww baby InuYasha can hear his daddy having at it! *coos at
little big-headed baby* Don't worry pumpkin..uncle & daddy are
only gonna kill each other...nothing for you to worry your cute self
about...

Oh Penny, I loved this...they were sparring AND (This is a biggie)
it remained playful!! And holy shit-hell froze the fuck over-Sesshy
smiled... Fuck me! He even... Dare i say? chuckled! Inu even
ribbed him... *Faints dead away*

Penny you are just reaching for all kinds of gold with this chap!!!
"You are my treasure* sniff! How friggin sweet is that?! OMG
& sessy...you are just making me fall in love with him. He'd
give all his crap to little big-head? OMG take me to a friggin
dentist because my teeth hurt! HOW SUGARY SWEET IS THAT?
Inu shrugged? *Bonks him on his fat head* Damn. At least say
something noteworthy... *Butt-munch Inu*

Inu WOULD bring up Kaede bangin' grandpa...Kags better get over
it! Old folks gotta get their swerve on too! LMAOOOOOO! OLD
PEOPLE FLESH?? Oh...Penny that was a riot...

Rin & Sess are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo formal!
If i had to call my bed partner 'my lord' all the time... *grunts* It's
like, mofo, you got a name! Or him with my lady... damn. Do
they eat on opposite ends of a 30000ft table too? Damn! But it
ended sweetly ...

As always Penny, you kicked royal arse. Well written witty & ALWAYS
a hoot -Gee. Did i say hoot?' O.O I love how the I/S relationship
is coming together and how very soon Inu will be letting the baby chew
on poison claws...heh. Vewy Vewy shweeeet!

Until the next...End for now 0.~
InuGrrrl

person Syko
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lets all say it together... "AWWWW!" ok momment over. I think it is great that they are getting along! Bravo!! And plus, I think this will be good for rin. Cant wait to read more!!

Inu-Love,
Syko
person hanyou_swimmer
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again a great update! The story is going along very well. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
person chanda
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it of course... I don't know what you have up your sleeves, but the bonding between the brothers is good, and that was very kind of Sesshomaru to give Inuyasha's son a title. I do hope that Kagome will heal Rin, so that they can be one big happy family...lol.


Look forward til your next chapter,
Chanda