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by penpaninu

person sAL
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So....the "youkai dignitary" has a name....Takaharu....NEEDS TO HAVE HIS GUTS NAILED TO THE FACE OF A FUCKIN CLIFF... but not before he is made ot eat them... yes, he must eat his guts for trying to hurt my lil Inu...dirty, no good, son of a bitch (litarally). well, he has made his move, inu and sessho's turn now, and i cant wait to see what move that is, it prolly wont detour him from his evil, baby capturing plan, and he'll prolly try even harder and more ruthlessly, but eventually
he'll get his, and the brothers are gonna give it to him!!!! ive NO DOUBT that they will make him pay, in full, for what he has done and when that time comes itll be a mind blowing chapter of violence and justice, lol

and poor hojo, im sure that he'll find some one...eventually, lol

all in all another good one, cant wait for 15!

sAL
person INUYOUKISKYE
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
INULaura Bard,

Sesshmo has been talking to you alot I see... did u let him out of that closet? Gawd you had himp pegged in this one. I could picture him drinking his tea and talking OMG that was brilliant .... although you always are INU.I love the way Yash and Sesshy are getting along , Yash still firery and Shessh still icey but they have found a way to co-exist as bothers and thats the shit! Also Tar awwwwwwww loves his uncle FIFI, isnt that cute and what a nose on that boy hes got his fathers instincts nd his mothers vision. I love it! MVP award to...... JAKEN- Sama , u go u little green imp. Way to point that staff of 2 heds at a youkai enemy. " This is the staff of 2 heads , the most powerfull staff in the world, so you gotta ask yourself one question... Do you feel lucky? Huh punk?" HAHAHAHAHA gotta love it. All i gotta sy is yes my ideas fuel the bard but Inu you create the magic. MUCH INU LOVE TO YA!
person InuGrrrl
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Penny!

I'm late as usual! I guess painting faces and being plagiarized
was quite the time eater for me! But I'm here now to give you
my wayward thoughts! 0.~

Ooooooh, so the plot thickens!!! Sesshy-sama's got a rat bastard
in his court eh? IIIIIInteresting. Surely that guy knows that Sess
will tear him SEVERAL new assholes if he tried anything? And
lest he forget that InuYasha can turn 'big ass dog' too! The baka!

So Jaken was babysitting. Sooo funny! I think he likes the lil'
runt on the DL. He knows he wanted to coo at him, maybe
dribble on him a bit :P Shit, he better get practicing. When
Rin has her monkey he's getting Sango's job, heh.

Does Sango know these boys be wanting to jump her bones?
She running around with cleavage & stuff, don't she know there's
a damn shortage of bitches over there? Shit, Miro ain't got his
wind tunnel no more. She better recognize!

Speaking of Miro...dude, where has your masculinity gone?
Why is Sango sharpening weapons while your making beaded
shit with the kiddies? O.O It's bad enough you wear sandals....
Must you be so femme? Get yer ass up & do those weapons!
Yeah, yeah, yeah, women can do anything a man can do &
vice versa...well FUCK that. This is feudal Japan! Get your
dress donning, sandal wearing arse up!

AWWWWW! Kawaii! Sesshy sent armed mofos with Inu
& the fam. Protecting the lil' pork chop no doubt. I lurve how
the family is getting back together. Now we can break out the
sodas, ribs, chicken & potato salad (yuck) and go to the forest!
Then Inu can say... "What's a family union?" 0.~

Kagome can be annoying sometimes. Why is InuYasha turning
into a pig just because he wants to nail her? We should all be
so fucking lucky... *Rolls eyes* On the flip side of that...the
mattress mambo? Penny, can I slap him now? He's sooo...
KORN-E!

Awww shyt...here comes the good stuff. It's about time pollyanna
got with the program! "She would be begging for him to stretch
her full in no time." That's fucking classic pen & so goddamn Inu!
This lemon was RAWR. Talk about laying it on him. It's about
time too. If he were my lil' hanyou, he'd never walk again! He'd be
so raw from all the....heh. TMI, ne?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
The hallway incident...Penny, I'm fucking howling! Just picturing Sess
half nakie scratching his belly like somebody that just ate, Inu damn
near hopping on one foot cuz he gotta pee, yet they both are trying to
hold a casual conversation. This is just the best!

"Of course….well…Let’s never speak of this again.”
“You got it!”

OMG! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Just freaking awesome. I love it!
their relationship is building so well. I mean Inu actually put the baby
in Sessie's arm himself. I thought that was really touching.

Damn, motherfuckers are plottin'! That's so fucked. But you know, that's
the real killer. How is that yall think you have say in a kingdom your asses
never built?! That INUTAISHO'S shyt, thus making it, SESSIE & INU'S
shyt. So where exactly do yall come in? I said it before & i'll say it again.

KILL EM' ALL.

Way to go, penny-Pen! Sorry I'm late, but there's always some shit, ne?
Loved the chap, the sex was HAWT and the plot is really coming along.
Well fucking done!!

-InuGrrrl
person Melissa
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am lovin your story. I am new, but I learn quickly. Thanx for the update. It definately has my vote. Great writing.
person chanda
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol on the a/n: Chocolate please, preferably a snickers bar...LOL

Little Inu poor thing, broke my heart thats someone was trying to take him away. (Oh, okay you got me, sorry I couldn't resist, he's just to damn cute.)

I guess I will find out who the new threat is in later chapters, although I do have my suspicions; so I will patiently await for your next update.

Chanda
person InuGrrrl
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Konnichiwa Penny-Pen!

Damn! I just left my review & here you are doing it to me again.
I shall leave my mark now lest I be late again O.O

Sesshy-sama, no this mangy dog ain't lipping off to you like he's
got it like that! You oughta backhand him with your good arm
them bust his eye out with your stump. That'll teach the rat bastard!

“We have discussed this already. Must this Sesshomaru repeat himself?
Find new questions or pull your tongue out,”

Oh, Fluffy-kun, that was classic LORD OF THE WESTERN LANDS
right there. I love when he's all forceful n' shyt! You know, all this
treating InuYasha like shit has to stop. Who the fuck do they think they
are? They're looking to get carved up oven roaster style by Fluffy &
Koinu! I love the way Inu's worried for Sesshie & how he called him
brother. *sighs happily* I lurve this 'family union' ^_^

Hahaha! Jaken got his lip stretched! Jaken got his lips stretched! I wonder
if it smelled like old breath...OMG! jaken saved Inutaro! I have a new love
for the little hump! Damn...this is getting crazy penny! O.O I lurve how
he calls him Little InuYasha...but where the hell is daddy?! Sessie?!

There go my babies!!! Damn...It's getting HAWT in hurrrre, lol. Sessie's
eyes are glowing, InuYasha is talking about the insult to his fam... O.O
DAYUM!!! Tell me Inu didn't sound like Sesshy-sama right then?!
So fucking regal and formidable. *Wipes drool*

Awww jii-chan is mad cuz he ain't gettin' no more ass! I still can't believe
you went there girl. Bodies just a flappin' with all that extra skin, lmao.

I swear I think Kag's friends got the hots for Inu. I mean shit, who wouldn't
try to nail him behind her back?! Yeah..yeah...yall are lying & you know it!
Then there's Hojo, lol. Inu still wants to whip his ass hehe. Penny did you see
that episode when he & Hojo were gonna have at it at the cultural festival?
OH MY GOD! I never had such fun with an ep. InuYasha blew the fucking
stage up talking about, "Bastard, who the hell are you?" *Swoons*
Dammit it's a conspiracy! Inu must have told Inutaro to puke on him! bad
double Koinu!

Damn, Sessie had guards drilling outside? Fucking Sesshomaru man...he
is a badass mofo! I love it! Such an ending. Ack! Shit is about to hit the
damn fan & i can't wait! I can see it now Sess & Inu back to back in fighting
stance...oh hell fucking yeah!!!! Bring it.

Penny, this is great! You're doing a great job & the amount of detail is awesome.
I can't wait for Sessie to get his hands on that bearded dog! Good damn job!

-InuGrrrl
person Syko
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter, loved the domination part of Kagome. What I want to know is who would want to hurt cute little Inutaro?! Cant wait till next chapter!

Inu-Love,
Syko
person Melissa
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved Intended mate and I am really enjoying InuTaisho Legacy as well. Update soon. I can't wait to see who the informant is, and if he dies. Is it Jaken? Well, I hope they have their baby (maybe that will help the brothers too) I loOoOoOve your work. Update SOON!
person Inuyoukiskye
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey INU

13 is your lucky number. Heres ya " review crack fix" OMG Jaken babysitting lol that imptrying to skate on his duty , but you know he loves rin and took care of her. He can be nice when he wants too , even without getting bopped on his head my a mad hanyou. TAN TAN TAN TAN... drama comming. I know what happens lol . Im the plot fiend lol but you are right saying there is a plot and its THICK . Speaking of that... lemonade for all !!!!!! YAY! Now thats the way Kags should tell her hanyou to sit! HELL yeah S&M baby! ( I is a hentai ) lol but u knew that. ANyway lots of INu love. cant wait till next chappie
person inuyoukiskye
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TIS ME AGAIN .... YAsh (who u know sits on my couch eating ramen) told me to say "open the closet door for and go walk Sesshmo"