rate_review Reviews

I read the precurser to this installment just recently. Your style of writing really hooked my interests. I just wanted to say keep up the wonderful work. You are getting better and better at your techniques. I loved that you thought to include more detail this last chapter; describing the sound of Inuyasha's sword being reinserted into it's sheath was a wonderful touch. The best advise I've ever heard to a writer was to show your reader what you mean instead of telling them. I, (obviously,) find that impossible and you seem to have it down. Congratulations!! I look forward to your next chapter.
Gratefully,
em

**WOOT PENNY YOU HENTAI YOU!**

Just finished another purrrrrfect chap & ofcourse I gotta comment.
What would happen if I didn't? The InuYasha gang would be lost...heh.

OMG Poor Rin. I knew this was leading up to her having a dead belly.
So cruel. Sess, can't you just sweep that sword over her? Sumthin?
It's supposed to heal shit... ungh. But you know Sess...God don't
like ugly.

Personally, I'd be trying to have as much sex as possible. Hell it's
a safe zone at this point. Sidewayz. Nice Touch.

Those healers. I just *know* Sess is gonna beat that bitch's head in.
Um..so periods smell like metal? Interesting. Only Sess's nose is on
that kinda new & improved shit. ^_^ I heard it was more fishy...lol.

Kagome. She annoys the fuck outta me, I swear. Bitch, you get
NAILED on the reg, back all in the grass, face all plowed in pillows...
But you wanna turn red talking about sex & periods? Bitch please.
You fuck so much, Miroku can't even get his monthly piece of
taijya ass, but you wanna get bashful? :Slaps her with a dildo:

InuYasha is such a cutie. I can't fuck with him. He's too hawt.
But I take back what I said about Hikaru. That brat's looking
for a husband. Uncle my ass.... :lol:

Oh & the babies are in lurve. So kawaii!

"Oh kagome...You know I will...." *Help myself to some more ass*
Hey Yash? Would you like some hammer for that nail? Hentai.

Jaken needs some butt. Seriously. He gets beat the fuck down
everytime he blinks. He needs at least *one* distraction. Damn.
Throw the toad a bone.

Speaking of....Sango & Miroku are just *nassy* lol. How you getting
turned out on the same counter you rolling dough on? Can you even
imagine the horror of finding a hair in your loaf?! An extra ingredient
in the tofu? :Cringes: Nassy...just nassy. And yall have *guests*
too. I can just see InuYasha pulling shit out of his teeth.

:Shakes head negatively.: Nassy.

Oi, where's Shippo? :snuffs: Lil' bastard got some ass & disappeared.

Penny -as always this was awesome. You write Sess/Rin (hell, every damn body)
so well! I feel so bad for Rin, even though i just stuck it to her :P It will be
interesting to see what kags does for her and how things will work between
Sess & InuYasha, especially since Kagome whines & falls on dicks over it. Heh.
Good luck with the move & i hope everything is perfect for you!

InuGrrrl

Once again you have out done yourself! I feel so bad for Rin! I was almost afraid that Sesshoumaru using tenseiga did that too her. Is Kagome going to tell Rin? Poor Rin! I can't wait for Inuyasha and Kagome to have more children. It just sounds like a lot of fun to me. Are you going to explain the well? Oh and by the way, I loved the Miroku/Sango scene! It was great! Well until the next update! Hanyou_swimmer

Konbanwa,

Ogenki desu ka? This story is omoshiori as always!!! You know you ALWAYS give my ideas alot of color. ( ego stroking if u havent noticed *wink*) Ok...lets start at the beginning . Rin hum.... you've given her alot of personality . In the manga and anime she plays a secondary character which we dont see much elaboration on . But you, oh Laura-sama have, for that a ^5. Even if Rin is not my fav character , in this story u can feel her distress and pain (lol the pain the pain *sorry inside joke*) As for FIFI ( hahahahahahahaha) gawd that was funny ..... hes actually grown to LOVE rin (awwwwwwwwwwww) and we can see fifi isnt that bad (mostley bark ya know ) . LMAO poor poor Miroku and Sango having to result to quickies . I know Miroku has gotta be hurting !!!!! maybe Kags should bring back some birth control or some condoms for Sango ne? TY for YASH / KAGS key lime .They are my fav and u know it :P . Anyway as always you rock girl . I hope your move goes swiftly , you know I'd help you if i was there. Remember do your homework on word hahahaha. Can't wait till kayobi no.

Amazing, again. But still, poor Rin! I feel bad for her!

Good luck in your new place, and many, many bright wishes!

~Syko

Another good chapter, and im glad that you like my reviews.

A good chapter, with lots of detail as i have come to expect from your work, very good job :)

- Urgazhi

Hey Penny!!
Glad to see you're doing better and Yessssss Lemonz!

OMG...Rin is a young hussy on all fours! LMAO!
Dayum Sess...you be taggin' that on the nightly.
Skurrred of you! But I gotta ask...

Why did you risk purification?! LOL Or at least a
tessaiga up the wazoo! Then again...you knew you
they couldn't do shit, didn't ya? Evil lil' fucker.
I still love the way you call her Kagome Woman.
So cutesy. At least you tried to reach out...even
though you might lose that arm too...

Sango, Miroku & the crew...you know he would've
beat you down de-lovely. Surely you're smarter
than that. :Raises Brow:

Jii-chan...you teme! I'm getting REAL tired of
your grumpy old ass! Let that baby's ears get
some goddamn air, you old fucker.

Tell me again why they don't live in the sengoku?!
It's gotta be better than sweeping shrines every
fucking day. My God! How many leaves are there?!

Poor Kaede...she's gonna kick the bucket, ne? Tsk.
Maybe she can get some 'old man love' when she
goes to Kagome's. I mean hell, I doubt it will
decrease her miko abilities at this point in the game.

I told ya the little chica's got it bad for uncle Inu.
Kags better be careful...little girls grow up. Just
ask Rinni....

InuYasha...you luscious hanyou you! Gettin' that grass
lovin & whatnot. :shivers: He be breakin that back on
the regular fo sho, heh. Got shit dripping down thighs
and all that. RAWR.

Kagome...Sess don't want you child, so chill. Let him
see the lil half bald pup and leave it at that. Geez. OR
was that just a diversion to get to that grass lovin? I
mean the last time I checked, when i was distraught
over shit, I didn't fall on a dick. :Snort:

As always Penny girl, the chappie rawked and there was
enough lemons to keep in ade for weeks. XD

Btw planet, did you know our penny is a NOMINATED
AUTHOR for the IYFG 3rd qtr? Uh huh. The girl got
skillz. Y'all better recognize! ^_^

i lOve da way u descRibe inutaRo, u make him SounD sOo aDorabLe !! x]~ pLzZz upDaTe !! i luv uuuu!!!! LoL xD~

WOW!!, Absolutly AMAZING!!! ive only recently gotten into reading fanfics and ive read quite afew really good ones and this is one of them, i read "Intended Mate" and absolutly fell inlove with it, its one of my favorites along with "The Lucky Ones", "Club Blue", and "The Art of Love", ive been thinkinf of writing one of my own, and youve acctually inspired me to put some serious thought into what i want to write about. PLEASE keep updating, and im sorry to hear about your accidemt, i hope your feeling better.

Yes, car accidents are no fun. Great chap. cant wait to read the 5th!