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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it so far you absolutely must update soon!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've done with this fic. It's dark at times, and I like how you didn't hold back from giving Kagome more pain rather than having her completely safe. It makes for some good plot twists and I can't wait to see what you write next. ^_^
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me sad gona cry why did you have to do that didn't she suffer enoguh (although i may not like it at the moment its a really good story and i really like it)
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I am back. I wrote you only few howers ago, that I will begin to read your story. Now I am finished and how I promised I write you a review. I begun to read and I couldn´t stop until I was finished with the last chapter. I must tell you, that this is a beautiful work and I enjoyed it pretty good. The start of it made me to download it and to read. I was taken back by your fantasy and decided that i will continue. I was not desapointed, I was startled in the positiv way and enjeoyed ever part of the story. It is so nice, that I am not able to write exactly, what I am feeleing (because of my gaping english).
What I enjoyed most: It is obvious have stupid Inu is, when he thinks, that he can take Kag and Kik and ahve them both at the same time. I allways liked, when Sess took kag away from the mut and give her a chance to protect herself by her awn power and that he will teach her. Well, wha i like as well is how Kag acts. I nearly fal from my chair, when she smacked Sess and how enraged she acted. It was verry amazing to see Sess speachless and shocked about her behavior. I think he is not used to such manners. Really great idea. It is also cool how cold she acts.
In the 12. chapter is rape. I don´t have problem to read such things. When I think about it i know, that rape haooens every day to many women in the world, so it´good to mention itand rememberus to be carefull. The rape was not Kags fault and I was glad that Sess came in time to prevent the marking of Kag. However I hope that she will come back and be normal (later later in the story)
I don´t know, what you plan, but the title let me hope, that things will work out. I am curious about the next chapter and hope you will continue this wonderfull story. Please don´t stop it is so beautiful.
Oh! I forgot to mention about the nice words from the song. How perfect the part was, great!
So until next time and if you want (and have time) please amswer me.
This is afic, that definitly caught my attention and I will follow it. Then have anice time and many reviews (and only positiv)
LINDA
I am back. I wrote you only few howers ago, that I will begin to read your story. Now I am finished and how I promised I write you a review. I begun to read and I couldn´t stop until I was finished with the last chapter. I must tell you, that this is a beautiful work and I enjoyed it pretty good. The start of it made me to download it and to read. I was taken back by your fantasy and decided that i will continue. I was not desapointed, I was startled in the positiv way and enjeoyed ever part of the story. It is so nice, that I am not able to write exactly, what I am feeleing (because of my gaping english).
What I enjoyed most: It is obvious have stupid Inu is, when he thinks, that he can take Kag and Kik and ahve them both at the same time. I allways liked, when Sess took kag away from the mut and give her a chance to protect herself by her awn power and that he will teach her. Well, wha i like as well is how Kag acts. I nearly fal from my chair, when she smacked Sess and how enraged she acted. It was verry amazing to see Sess speachless and shocked about her behavior. I think he is not used to such manners. Really great idea. It is also cool how cold she acts.
In the 12. chapter is rape. I don´t have problem to read such things. When I think about it i know, that rape haooens every day to many women in the world, so it´good to mention itand rememberus to be carefull. The rape was not Kags fault and I was glad that Sess came in time to prevent the marking of Kag. However I hope that she will come back and be normal (later later in the story)
I don´t know, what you plan, but the title let me hope, that things will work out. I am curious about the next chapter and hope you will continue this wonderfull story. Please don´t stop it is so beautiful.
Oh! I forgot to mention about the nice words from the song. How perfect the part was, great!
So until next time and if you want (and have time) please amswer me.
This is afic, that definitly caught my attention and I will follow it. Then have anice time and many reviews (and only positiv)
LINDA
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
My name is Linda and I just began to tead this story. I will write you later more, but for now I think the story is good and I think I will enjoy it. So please continue in writing and updating. The first sides are really good. I will review or write you in few day, when I read a little more (to write about the details that I liked at the story the most)
If you have time please mail me back. Linda
My name is Linda and I just began to tead this story. I will write you later more, but for now I think the story is good and I think I will enjoy it. So please continue in writing and updating. The first sides are really good. I will review or write you in few day, when I read a little more (to write about the details that I liked at the story the most)
If you have time please mail me back. Linda
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work keep it up
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, cool. I like this story alot, so please update soon!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not soooo evil actualy i've seen worse......................everyone don't hate me for this i already hate myself but here gos.................if you want a good cliff hanger stop right in the middle of the bed seen lol now whos the evil one? ................MUWAHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA . lol
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz this is a totally awesome story no joke its freakin awesome so update soon cuz kagome/sesshomaru are my fav pairing dont they look cute together awwwww ok bye yall
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am truely in love with this fic!!! I hope to see more chapters in the near future and a couple of lemony goodness added in for a flavorful treat. :3 Yumm