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omg!!! ~dies~ i love your stories!! they're beyond amazing!! usually i end up reading a storey and say something like "god, if only they'd done this, or changed this, or said this, the storey would be 10 times better!!" but not your storey!! ~bows~ you are a goddess amoung authoresses!!! ^^ <3 keep writing! AND PLEASE STOP THE TORCHER of HUGE pauses between updates!!! it's evil i tell you!! EEEEEVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLL! XD toodles noodle-ette

~cough~cough~dies~ this storey is SOOOOOOOOO good!! but i'm dieing of lack of new chappies ~crawling on ground~ save ..... me ...... UPDATE YOUR STOREY WITH YOUR MIGHTY AUTHRERESS ABILITIES AND SAVE MEEEEEE!!!! ~huddles into courner rocking back & forth going slowly insane~ --siffering withdrawl-- O.o

AAAAHHHHH NOOO!!! CONTRADICTIONS!! O.o
"His heart lurched as he saw the pain mingled with the fierce determination within the deep brown depths of her eyes as she grabbed the prayer beads from around his neck and removed them." <- chappie 1,

"she screamed sit at least a dozen times and watched the dust fill the air and tried to sink below the water." <-chappie 19

CONTRADICTIONS! ~srry had to point it out!! it's such a goos storey i don't want it ruined! XD

loved it

this story is really good. I can't wait til it is finished.

UGGGGGG!!! hahaha, you are pure evil!! It's .... almsot 5am here!! and i keep saying to myself "ok after this chapter I MUST SLEEP!!" and then THE CLIFFHANGERS OOOOOOOH THE CLIFFHANGERS!! and i can't put it down ... er ... minimize it? (seeing as it's on the internet, not a book). EVVVIIILLLL!! hahaha o well lack of sleep is worthe it!! ~bows to you~ haha great storey!! i absolutly LOVE it!! anyways, ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE!! ~gets on white horse~ wait .... i don't need a horse to read the next chappie ... awwww!!! o well, I'M KEEPING THE CAPE!! ~runs away before some one steals her cape away~

great story...will there be any more?

umm.... yea that is your fault..... lol.... anyways.. please let some unexpected power to rise in kagome...or Sesshomaru...i hate the thought of Naraku even touching what is Sesshomaru's...it;s...... icky.... anyways... i love the story... keep it up and update SOON!!!!!!!!! please.... thank you

bad writer....oh waite thats something i would do keep up the good work i really love it

Of course you are evil!! If you weren't your storey would be about butterflies and pixies, and flowers, and inu-yasha and kagome would live happily ever after with kouga and Aome and kikyou would RIP, and etc. etc. ... WHO WANTS THAT?? we need angst! and more angst!! and lost & lost of angst!! and the lemony goodness in between!! <3 the storey so far, but i only just finished chappie 4!! BUT I LOVE IT!! =D