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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.................oh and heres the new site for single spark http://kagsess.pixelled.com/fanfic.php
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg it stopped at 25?!?!?!??!??!?!?!? im like freakin out here!plez write more 4 thawing her heart NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!or rather SOOOOOON
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww warm and fuzzy....now can we kill naraku already i feel he has over stayed his welcome
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooooo good! you have to update!! NOW!!! Do it!!!! *pweeze?* Oh cmon!!! ....LAZY!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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eeeee, very very good! I actually stayed up all night reading it because once I got past a certain point (the begining) I couldn't stop. *waits for more*
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Um, lets see, actual review things. There are some spelling errors floating around there, but of course they can be cleared up with word. Through out the story, your writing skills developed nicely and theres not really much to say about the stock story besides that its absolutly wonderful. Its just the usual things that seem to catch people, the repetitive use of words (you like orbs...a lot, luckly it doesn't detract too much from the read). Theres also the onrunning sentences that seem to get away from you sometimes. Too many sentences in a row tends for rather monotone read as well.
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I dare say the story was good enough I didn't notice it all that much untill I went back for a second glance.
Keep up the good work!!
-Cera D.
eeeee, very very good! I actually stayed up all night reading it because once I got past a certain point (the begining) I couldn't stop. *waits for more*
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Um, lets see, actual review things. There are some spelling errors floating around there, but of course they can be cleared up with word. Through out the story, your writing skills developed nicely and theres not really much to say about the stock story besides that its absolutly wonderful. Its just the usual things that seem to catch people, the repetitive use of words (you like orbs...a lot, luckly it doesn't detract too much from the read). Theres also the onrunning sentences that seem to get away from you sometimes. Too many sentences in a row tends for rather monotone read as well.
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I dare say the story was good enough I didn't notice it all that much untill I went back for a second glance.
Keep up the good work!!
-Cera D.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugg..the bugger cut off on me for some reason. *kicks the review system* Anywho, to resum up, its an amazing story...no one can deny that, keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!
-Cera D.
-Cera D.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! It's amazing how you have so many twists in the plot. I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^.^ You are an awesome writer. Keep up the great work!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this story is AWSOME so far! i hope you are still writing........ keep up the great work!!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Absolutely great. Can't wait until the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I hope that your will be able to finish it soon.....