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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! please update!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!! Please Please Please up date sooon!!!!!!!! cant wait to read more chapters
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U should leave the story like it is I enjoyed it. U should continue to write more like that.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too fucking short and please learn to spell. I'll beg you like Inu did. Oh well, It's out of my hands anyways. Just make the lemon longer next time. OK? Can you do that for me? Thanks man
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fuckin' great... please more PLEASE!!!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the hell? That wasn't a story...hell that wasn't even porn...that was just crap.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that wasn't bad it was good please write more can't wait to see what happens
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK that was ok!! It was fast into the sex part but it was ok...I want to see and update on this u could make a good story out of this.Oh i have some advise for u, When you write make sure you space out the sentance's Becasue it confuses me and probly other ppl too.. WELL keep up the good work!! Until Next Time, goDDess