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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the first chapter was good, but the rest Im not to sure about. there seams to be a lot of back story and Im really hving trouble apriciating such a wonderful work when Im kind of fuzzy on how all the originl characters fit in with our Inu-tachi. Good work on your characters though they seam intriging.Good luck.
~DarknessDawns
~DarknessDawns
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* without really knowing what was going on i was still amused... not what, but WHY... *nods*
i assume you are still setting up the players, introducing characters etc. the interactions are amusing. humor is always good! looking forward to more.
thank you,
ginny
i assume you are still setting up the players, introducing characters etc. the interactions are amusing. humor is always good! looking forward to more.
thank you,
ginny
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sometimes you have to write "the long chapter about… nothing" to set all of the pieces on the board... you have to set out the board too.
the aya character, is she ayumi? just clutching at straws here and making wild guesses.
we still left a human yasha with at least one other who was involuntarily pulled through the well. intregued.
thank you,
ginny
the aya character, is she ayumi? just clutching at straws here and making wild guesses.
we still left a human yasha with at least one other who was involuntarily pulled through the well. intregued.
thank you,
ginny
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so this is a re-write?
this is the first time i have come upon this story and i am intreiged, i am glad you are bringing it back.
thank you,
ginny
this is the first time i have come upon this story and i am intreiged, i am glad you are bringing it back.
thank you,
ginny
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember reading this before, but I'm certainly enjoying it now! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww! so sad!! i hope he doesnt hurt his own wolves! update soon!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think its really good so far, I like your character...she will definetly give a Koga a run for his money.
Chanda
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is an amazing story. I love what you have written so far and i can't wait for more. I never review stories but when i read yours i just had to because of how much i enjoyed it and looked forward to your next update. ~Selenity