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by Qiana

person Jessica
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..:::+WOW+:::..
person Anonymous
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome should get Kagura and Kanna out of Naraku's reach.

It would be interesting if the child is really Sesshomaru's and not Naraku's.

If it is Naraku's child, I think it would be very interesting if it craves for Sesshomaaru's touch and not Naraku's.

Wonder who Kaguya reminds Kagome of?

What was Kaguya sorry about?

Please update real soon, this is really really great.
person Subaru
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh....I cant wait for the next update, this story is so suspensful! Update soon!!!
person Anonymous
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update real soon.
Very interesting.

I'm sure Kikyo would like to believe that, Kagome is starting to like Naraku.
Sorry I'm not much of Kikyo's fan, especially if they aren't friends.
I'm very wierd that way.

- Wonder what Sesshomaru willl do now, that he knows the truth?
- What about the doctor, isn't he a bit suspecious that the father of her hasn't shown up?

- Will what's her name listen to what Naraku said about harming Kagome?
- If any harm has come of her, what will he do?

It would be interesting when time comes instead of Naraku's touch, she and the baby wants Sesshomaru's.

Is it really Naraku's child?
I keep hoping that by some strange oddness that it turns out to be Sesshomaru's child.

This is great, please keep up the wonderful work your doing.
person SilkenOrgasm
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so far..Can't wait for more!!

Sel~
person britne
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i need 2 kno what happend and i really really really love this story!
person Subaru
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, but I cant believe you left it at a cliffy! Please update soon!
person ayesha
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this story just keeps getting better and better! hope u update soon! i really wanna knoe wats gonna happen next!
person ayesha
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i forgot to ask u a question. if naraku is 24, how can kagura be his child, she's 17! that means that she was born wen he was like 5! how is that possible?
person Subaru
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you? That is so sad! I hope you make this get resolved soon. The suspence of Sesshy not knowing the truth is killing me!