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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh, refreshing lemon flavored sex. nice.... oh well, I thought it was a very well-written scene , plus, Ithink the description of Shiori was just dam HOT. I'm guessing she's the new lady of the western lands now... oh well.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing or else i will hunt you down and hurt you till you finish
it's that good
it's that good
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow someone thinks i'm a groupie!! OoOo but anyway great solo lemon lol i hope that will be lemon in the next chappie! weeeee LEMON power.......... sorry sugar high!!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this story! I think it's a great set of twists and turns! I think it would also be funny if Kanna showed up and tried to seduce Inuyasha away from Shiori
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapie, oo wonder what's going to happen between Inuyasha and Shiori *hint hint wink wink* anyway keep the awsome chapies coming!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, very interesting story, don't see many fics that would feature Shiori with anyone... especially Inuyasha. You have some spelling and grammar errors here but nothing to raise a hassle about.
For instance, not meant to be insulting, but here is the list of errors that i spotted:
Instead of the word "Scent" you had "Sent".
"New" instead of "Knew"
"Threw" instead of "Through".
That's about all i spotted, other than that, great stuff you have written here! Very nice.
For instance, not meant to be insulting, but here is the list of errors that i spotted:
Instead of the word "Scent" you had "Sent".
"New" instead of "Knew"
"Threw" instead of "Through".
That's about all i spotted, other than that, great stuff you have written here! Very nice.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... very nice so far, although I don't like the format too much(Thats just a personal opinion) You have two very nicely written chapters here, not only that but no OoCness
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice concept having Inuyasha go back and check on Shiori
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start to a intresting match and thanks for makingher 20ish hehe
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning! The twist with Kagome and hojo was a little sudden, but after years of shard-hunting things are bound to change, ne? I'm intrigued to see where this will go, but even more alert to the fact that Tenseiga rest of Inuyasha's hip. What exactly happened to Sesshoumaru?? Ah, many questions already. Good stuff so far!