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by inuyashasgirl

schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW This story was so heart warming. I Loved it!!
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is one of the best lemons i have ever read! bravo! you are a great writer in my book! woo hoo! *cheers* ;) neways great fic keep up the great writing but i wouldnt recommend branching off from this its either a oneshot or not and this is a oneshot! this is really awesome and i hope to see more of your work! congrats on being such a great writer!!! * praises some more *

angst
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one word:
abso-fucking-lutely-amazing
... it counts as one okay?
haha! ^_^
person Niko
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww that was so sweet and everything. u should really do another story about those 2
person a lost soul
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so awesome, and sweet. I love it dearly.
person Paradiseboy
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! No typos.No rushing.A variety of positions.Clear expressions of emotions.
I really think you are a great writer.Please make more exuberant stories like this.



person Meena Vangel
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was fantastic... you are a great writer... keep up the good work... :)
person inu-fan2424
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, the thing I like most about your fic is that you understand that inuyasha loves Kikyou, he just loves Kagome more