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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1... OH I loved it.. very different indeed... I will continue to read this great fic...
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is a pretty could story so far and I do hope that you cotinue with it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you did fine, love the angst... update soon.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good start, i am intrigued. update soon
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was most definitely not "shit" as you so eloquently put it, lol. It was, in fact, a great first chapter. The descriptions were good, the dialogue was interesting, and you nailed the dynamics between Inuyasha and Kagome. The scene on the bridge was a great way for the them to met and I look forward to reading your second chapter.