rate_review Reviews

Chapter 1... OH I loved it.. very different indeed... I will continue to read this great fic...

It is a pretty could story so far and I do hope that you cotinue with it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

No you did fine, love the angst... update soon.

really good start, i am intrigued. update soon

Okay that was most definitely not "shit" as you so eloquently put it, lol. It was, in fact, a great first chapter. The descriptions were good, the dialogue was interesting, and you nailed the dynamics between Inuyasha and Kagome. The scene on the bridge was a great way for the them to met and I look forward to reading your second chapter.