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for The Bridge

by KissMeHugMe

person Peacemaker
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.3 was another great chapter and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person MooseMan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! nice 2 see you've updated again and the story is great as usual. i think you did sessh's personality just fine, execpt the slightly off like u said about the leaving so abriptivly. but none the less every other bit of it was on target. it was awesome the kagome got 2 rub inuyasha's ears. ^_^ Inuyasha also better go back lol, and they continue there relationship which isn't much yet. So far i don't see how u will later incorperate miroku or sango but i'd be perfectly happy as it is, as long as it progresses ^^ exallent story as usual, sry about my bad spelling lol. i'll be reviewing your next update as soon as i see it ^^
person kegome
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good please up date soooooooon cues this is getting so good and they should fall in love and it should be a deep love
person kegome
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please this is getting good they should fall in love and kegoma should ask inuyasha to go to the dance with her that would be asom.
person chanda
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO you have my review... this story is so facinating... I am awaiting the next chapter....

Chanda
person Twilight
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really good story please write more I can't wait
person bKatty
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
adorable! now update! please?
person MooseMan
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was pretty good. i do wish it had inu in it but it certainly makes me and i'm sure other readers more exicted 2 get the next chapter. hope it can be tomorrow! and with a long of not just about full chapter with inuyasha in it ^_^ good job so far.
person Peacemaker
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2 was another well done chapter and Kagome's character is slightly ooc but, there is nothing wrong with that. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person mooseman
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i think the story was very good, inuyasha is chararacterized well and so is kagome. i think continueing will be great and i'll love 2 read and review the next chapter!!! plz do continue the story :)