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for The Bridge

by KissMeHugMe

person INU YASHA!!!!!! I LOVE YOU
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, ur SHOULD DAMN KEEP THIS FUCKING STORY UP!! please its so good i like it and thr fluff was enough!!! I no they LOVE eachother..But who fucking cares what other ppl's reviews are listen to mind it better!!lol
person Twilight
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that is so fucking good please write a leomon oh and by the way this is one if not the best story that I ever read hope you wright more PLEASE!!!

*Twilight*
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope that you continue this. It's quickly turning into one of my favorite stories! Please keep updating! It's really quite good.
person chanda
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter. My advice, it's hard to juggle more than one story ... hell I have three so far on AFF and currently working on another as we speak. Sometimes it's good especially if you have writers block with one story then you just work on the other. Unless your utterly F*cked, then you sigh and start a new day. I think you should go for it... I would love to see what other great stories you have up there in your imaginative brain...

Well until next time,
Chanda
person inufangirl
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wheres the lemon??????????????????/
person kegome
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going this story is getting so good and the are going to fall in love and that makes me so happy it makes me cry so please up date soon icant wayt for the next one and make ti sexy and hot that would be awsom hahahah
person chanda
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its slow and steady. However, thoroughly enjoyable... Until next chap

Chanda
person Obaasan
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot line.

I never did care for Hojo. He's too thick-headed for someone of Kagome's temperment.

I can't wait to see what happens next.
person holysinner1987
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh!! soo good! you've gotta write more soon! it's just getting to the really great bit!!
person CrimsonYoukai
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrr. I was hoping so see more Inu & kags in that last chapter.
It says fluff...but it actually wasn't. Anyhoo..good so far but
not nearly enough kags/Inu interaction. Kagome's friends are mad
boring and I think a bit too much time is spent on them. Other than
that it's good and I plan to follow it. Hopefully I/K will spend more
time together. Hint.