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for The Bridge

by KissMeHugMe

person monykkka
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heyyyyyy i wanna know what's next!!!!
pretty pretty pretty please :)

I loooove what you did to Inuyasha, he's just great!
person rin.dee
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope your computer gets fixed soon because im aching to find out what happens.
hmm... even though having a lemon right now would be an amazing decision, i think that you should work up to the actual thing and leave them at cuddling right now. i know, most people probably are gonna hate me if they read my review, but tahts just what i honestly think. i mean, inuyasha's common sense says 'not now' and kagome's is saying 'yes now,' and seeing as how inuyasha is clearly the dominant, he should stop before things get too far.
also, since you have warned us about "rape" i think that hobo should almost rape kagome and inuyasha should kill him! MUAHAHAHA! i dont hate the guy, i really dont. but when he acts so stupid and dense i just wanna kick him on the crotch and run away leaving him gasping for air. yup yup.
well, once you update if you could email me to tell me, it would be jussstttt peachy. xxpuppyearsxx@hotmail.com
thanks! - rin.dee
person Deborah
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. The setting is great!
person aPaThY AnGeL
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I SO understand about the whole computer crap. You have a piece of shit just like mine..sigh*hits screen*..My own story has been delayed for a full 4 months because this shit is acting up.*I have GOT to get me a Dell....back to the convenience store.*damn* anyway, I really like your story. And u can update it at your own time cause those flamers can't do a damn thing. Kepp writing, and no matter what, let nothing they say bother you! It don't make u a sucker it makes you tougher!

-that big aA!(aPaThY AnGeL)
person kagome
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok you no what i have been wayting for this story forever so when are you going to update it i hope some time soon?
person sqeeky1990me
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really beautiful story! I hope you get your computer fixed soon! Please update ASAP
person kagome
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UP DATE PLEASE
AND THANK YOU!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kagome
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT IS GOING ON YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED IN LIKE FOREVER WHATS UP WITH THAT I AM STARTTING TO THINK OF GIVING UP AND MOVING ON SO UP DATES COMON THERE ARE LOTS OJF OTHER PEOPLE WANTING TO NOW WHAT HAPPINS TO THEM.
person C.F.L.
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good, I hope you'll continu it soon!
person mooseman
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey it's ok that u havn't been able 2 update. i hadn't been on in awhile 2 read so only 1 chapter has been made. but now u have 2 continue that i'm back:P lol it's really good though and i think they should continue on instead of just cuddling lol :P eather way it's continuing 2 be great thats why u gotta update! lol plz update a.s.a.p ^_^