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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1-13) I have read the first 13 chapters. Boy, what great reading! Simply beautiful. I love the avenue your story is traveling. The torment that the two will face with their relationship. Your portrayal of Sango is how I love to see her. I also love the way Sesshomaru gets into his role. I know there is more to come. I will continue to travel this avenue of great storytelling you have provided. Peace!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was some story! I really enjoyed how Sango tricked Sess in the beginning and I'm glad that everything worked out and everyone got what they deserved. Keep up the amazing work! :P
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS A MASTERPIECE FROM BEGINNING TO END. YOU ARE A VERY CREATIVE WRITER IN ALL ASPECTS. I WAS TRUELY MOVED BY YOUR STORY AND HOPE TO READ OF THEM BY YOU. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. YOU ARE TRUELY A GIFTED PERSON WITH A GREAT UNDERSTANDING FOR WRITING.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was a wonderful story and I'm glad I came across it! I truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter and I was sad to see it come to an end, but the ending was wonderful!!!
The humor was excellent and... well overall the story was very well written and I wasn't disappointed at all!
Excellent work, bravo!
The humor was excellent and... well overall the story was very well written and I wasn't disappointed at all!
Excellent work, bravo!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know where to begin. I saw this story up on the front page of the Inuyasha fictions, and I was seriously intrigued. Even though it was 52 chapters long (but completed) I was somewhat drawn to read this. From the first chapter, I was drawn in. It took me a good three or four days to get enough time to read it, and each chapter made me glad I could read it all at once, and not have to wait for updates, it was seriously that good.
Sesshoumaru's predicament has been covered before, him as a slave, but your spin on it was completely surprising, and very, VERY unique, intriguing me further. Kagome as a miko with no family is also a new spin on her charecter that I haven't seen before. It surprised me and also got my attention that Sango would be her demon-slayer self, as well as being able to capture Sesshoumaru as a gift to her 'sister' to protect her.
As the story progressed, I could feel the tension myself at the trials that Kagome and Sesshoumaru had to over come to realize their love for one another, and the way you introduced Kikyou and Inuyasha was utterly amazing and I loved that part alot. Kikyou and Kagome becoming friends, instead of always being enemies (as in other Inuyasha fictions) was a very nice change, and I enjoyed it immensely. As each charecter came into play, I was more and more entangled in this unique and lovely plot.
Rin as an orphan and being saved by Sesshoumaru was an awesome way to bring the sweet child into the story, and it was so real in this story, making it really cool. I love everything about this story, and the fact that it's AU just astounds me. It was a really, REALLY awesome story to read, and I enjoyed every moment of it. It was aptly named, as well, and I applaud you on your awesome story. I'm sorry to hear about your father, and I hope you're doing okay.
Okay, this review was freaking long, but well earned and so deserved. This story rocked so hard, and I loved it. I look forward to anything else you write. Keep up the terrific work, Rinseternalsoul. It's super schway.
Sayuri-chan~
Sesshoumaru's predicament has been covered before, him as a slave, but your spin on it was completely surprising, and very, VERY unique, intriguing me further. Kagome as a miko with no family is also a new spin on her charecter that I haven't seen before. It surprised me and also got my attention that Sango would be her demon-slayer self, as well as being able to capture Sesshoumaru as a gift to her 'sister' to protect her.
As the story progressed, I could feel the tension myself at the trials that Kagome and Sesshoumaru had to over come to realize their love for one another, and the way you introduced Kikyou and Inuyasha was utterly amazing and I loved that part alot. Kikyou and Kagome becoming friends, instead of always being enemies (as in other Inuyasha fictions) was a very nice change, and I enjoyed it immensely. As each charecter came into play, I was more and more entangled in this unique and lovely plot.
Rin as an orphan and being saved by Sesshoumaru was an awesome way to bring the sweet child into the story, and it was so real in this story, making it really cool. I love everything about this story, and the fact that it's AU just astounds me. It was a really, REALLY awesome story to read, and I enjoyed every moment of it. It was aptly named, as well, and I applaud you on your awesome story. I'm sorry to hear about your father, and I hope you're doing okay.
Okay, this review was freaking long, but well earned and so deserved. This story rocked so hard, and I loved it. I look forward to anything else you write. Keep up the terrific work, Rinseternalsoul. It's super schway.
Sayuri-chan~
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord! You are a writing machine! Your speedy ability to crank out finely-written fanfics like a StG-44 would crank out 8mm bullets simply boggles my mind.