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i really hope the story change sesshomaru as a slave i dont really like that in my on choice i perfer he stay proude and arrgont just way he is i love all you storys but this one is the last on my list

this is by far one of the best stories ive read on this site. keep up the good work.

I absolutely loved your story, it was so origional after all the repeats I have read. You did a truley wonderful job with the plot and everything, I give you a big round of applause. I started reading this on sesskag.com but when the sight malfunctioned I had to come find it somewhere else, lol, bless you for back ups the suspense was killing me. Keep writing I would love to read more of your stories, and am gonna watch your future writings. Bye for now and congratulations again on an excellent read, thank you for being out of the ordinary for once.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really enjoyed this, pretty much read the whole thing in 1 go. I do have a slight correction, you use seen when in most cases it should be saw, seen is the past tense form of saw & in all but maybe 1 case it's not a past tense situation. An example would be 'she saw him an hour ago' as opposed to 'she hadn't seen him for a week', I hope this makes sense & is helpful.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Ch. 45-52) AAAH! Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful! Creativity at it's finest! Wonderful storytelling and of course a happy ever after. Naraku! What a S-- of a B---, but he is needed for the Spice of a story. I agree with the viewer Mary, Sesshomaru's character maintaining his regal air and yet be a humble slave is amazing. You've done a wonderful job! Keep Writing! Peace!

Wow. I can't believe this only has eight reviews.... because it is simply some of the best writing I have had the pleasure of reading. Somehow, you've managed to show a side to Sesshomaru I have never seen before, yet his personality is dead on with what it should be. Amazing how you were able to make him seem regal and humble at the same time. I love the whole Sesshomaru-as-a-slave thing; its so unexplored yet its just so fasinating. I was slightly daunghted by the fact that it was 52 chapters, but once I started reading it I got so sucked in I ended up staying up all night reading. Can you imagine the next day, I had early classes and I haden't gone to bed at all... but it was worth it. I'm inspired by you Rin. Yours such an excellent writer. Reading the things you publish makes me consider publishing some of the stories I write. Great work.

Ch. 31-44) Whoa! These chapters are great! Love Rin's appearance with her sweet self! The Arena scenes were Great! I could see every battle you described the miko's had to go through. Knew Naraku couldn't be left out. True to his nature causing chaos. The Lemons of course nicely written. Now I'm on to finishing this story! Loving it all so far! Keep writing!

Ch. 14-30) Wow! I'm loving this story more and more! You really have a knack for creating scenes of uncomfortable air. I like the fact how you used the moral sense of honesty where Sesshomaru and Kagome were concern in their favor with the high priestess. Inuyasha complicated as ever but adorable. Kykio portrayl is going to take some getting use to being that most stories I've read she's always being bashed. I love the lemons, great and beautifully written. Going on to the next few chapters which I know I will enjoy. Peace!