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for Techno Dreams

by unique

person Deziko
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lob this story! Now go forth and become a happy cabbage! You shall not sink MY cheerio!
person sassy
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story now fucken up date.
person Inukamisashi
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grrr...I hate Naraku! *kicks Naraku* Oh, how I loathe that beast! Treating a person like some animal...darn him!

As for Sess and Kag, there'll be another conflict scene with yelling and screeching I pressume...Can't wait! Update soon! Keep it up! ^^
person lady of the west
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so kagome is a dancer and she has atraccted all of these demons.

what will she do? will kagome return to sesshomaru and what will be her reaction?

poor kagura she goes through so much and she is truly a good mother to kanna.

what did kagome see when she opened the door?

what happen after naraku did that to kagura?

shippou and rin are happy but what about kagome?

what question was sesshomaru thinking about asking kagome now?

onegai kami-sama onegai don't let sesshomaru make a mess of it again.

update soon please

person wynter89
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that is one weird situation. i really feel sorry for Kanna. i hope you update soon.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you
person lost child
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, I'm truely enjoying this story, Keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp*
what promise was that???
update soon
i really really liked it^^
person Denara
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is a way to kool chapter..... just luv the fact that Kagome works at a club and dances for a living... way to neat.... i really like the story so far and can;t wait to read the rest of the chapters
person Sesshysgrl4
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story so far! You must keep going and update soon!
_vanessa_
person lost child
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i seemed to have reached the end of the chapter...but there seems to be no answer to Kagome's question...hurry and write the next chapter soon so I can find out....cuz, uuh, even I don't remember the promise she made