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I really like it! I have an idea though! Why not make Naraku try to rape Kagome and Sesshomaru stop him, thus the stress would cause the baby some harm, but so much to make Sesshomaru furious. I love it so far! Please update soon!

Now… where was I? Enjoying the story immensely sweetpea… After falling off the chair after reading the pairings in chapter two and seeing that this was going to also be a Kouga/Ayame pairing, I had to continue… I’m not a huge fan of Kagome, but I think it’s more the fact that I’ve read some pretty crappy stories with her paired with Sesshoumaru’s *drools* Yup… Sesshie is my hotdog I have to say… Anyways, I like the way you’ve paced this story so far. I can just see all of the hotdogs going off, hot and sweaty, shirtless and shameless on the dance floor *slides off seat!* Yum!! And how’s Kouga wearing a ‘Hi… my names Kouga’ shirt… How adorably corny ^_^… And Kagome’s ‘BadGirl’ panties… too good! Sesshoumaru’s such a naughty puppy being the voyeur and all. And I had to laugh at Inuyasha losing control of his dick in front of Kikyo… very funny. I loved the way you described the girls dancing. It was really vivid… Well done. And how’s Kikyo’s form… asking Naraku for a ‘ride’… Soooo naughty! And then Kagome punching the shit out of Kikyo! Priceless! This story just keeps getting better…. I am a very happy little hentai to know that there are still a stack more chapters for me to chew on…

Kudos sweetpea ~_^

The Sinner

Ahhhhh! The plot bunnies are scattering nicely... Another well-written chapter sweetpea. Only I can't quite get what Bankotsu's trip is. Ha! I had a chuckle at Sesshie posing when Bankotsu coming in and Kagome noticing how big his wang was *but off course... could it be anything other???* Ohs! And Kag's gets her first kiss of Sesshie *starry eyes*... Very nice, sweetpea.... Sadly, I must go now and play with my muses...

Thankyou for a good story so far. Can't wait to read more ~_^

Damn! Just my luck ain't it?! I start getting into a story and then I get interrupted *rolls eyes* Will be bookmarking this one sweetpea... It's oh so good (and i'm only up to chapter 3!!) Love to comment more but I gotta go *doh!* Back soon...

Peace

The Sinner ~_^

Wow, loved the chapters they were beyond expectation. I loved the bashings and drama scenes they were all to livid. Now that Kagome and Kagura are "friends" I wonder if she will help in protecting Kagome from Naraku? Seems like I have some waiting to do before I find out anyways love the story keep up the good work.

I look foward to reading more!

ITS SO AWESOME!

please update soon!

Naraku is scary.... over all i loved the chapter.. it was different. everything is starting to build up, sesshomaru and inu yasha are stressed, kikyou is a wh*re, kagome pregnant and more... wow what a fix you put them all in.
good luck
i hope you update soon

OMG. Please tell us what Miroku and Sango are having! Also, I think Sesshomuru should announce both, but first the marrige and >then< the pregnancy. You're so good and this is definately one of my favorite stories. New chapter please!!!