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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I liked this. I thought the one line paragrahs were interesting, they called attention to your details and emphasized. Lines like that force the imagination which I personally like. Also the passionate feelings of dedication, jealousy, and love are raw here. Good job!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, it's raw..yes..that it ^^ i love it
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!! LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!!!! ....Rin had Sesshomaru begging!!!!!....this was a great one shot....I hope you'll do more Sesshomaru and Rin stories........GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE HOW YOU PUT A LEMON IN THE FIRST CHAPTER. UPDATE!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... P really like this story especially Rin being the mistress and all... and Sesshomaru on his knees crawing to Rin please continue don't leave it as a one-shot PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^____________^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good ! U should do another oneshot like this but telling of what happend after she left with him!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool....very nice chapter. Hope tat you will write more soon, i really love your stories.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really really liked this.