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We wait...patiently or otherwise. I choose patiently. And I understand those brick walls. You could give it candy or an anime character and then run like hell when it goes "Plot Bunnies O' DOOM" on you. Here's the reference to my inane commenting...:

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Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read her mothers' reaction and what happens between the three.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I hope you continue soon, so good luck with your writer's block.

Please keep going. This is great! I cannot wait to see more.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

thanks so much for that story that was so good and for that story i think i would give it out of 10 so far is 9/10 like i said it is really great to read and a flow to it that many stories that i have been reading do not have so thankyou and plz let me know when you have done more.

WOW!! I must say that I am impressed. I usually avoid story that do not list the pairings. I happen to be a pro -pre-kagome inu/kik (if there NEVER was a Kagome ever) and DEFINITE inu/kag san/mir a huge follower of Rumiko's pairings. I also enjoy the occassional Inu/Kag/Sess pairing. If it is well written. I like how you have the characters mature over the years. I think that they would these effects on each other as they grew closer together. I hope that the three of them will share each other equally and be just as passionate with the other if they are alone. I usually get disappointed because although writers say this pairing it usually tends more towards one or the other and I have yet to see one where they are equal. This is quite a challenge for writers! I can see from the eight chapters I have read that you seem to have this well in hand. I like how Sess keeps refering to Kagome as OUR mate. And Inu agreeing!! I congratulate you on a beautiful start and touching story. I like how it was Kagome's possible death that brought the two brothers' together. I also thank you for being the only one I have come across with having Koga being MATURE and understanding about the way things are with his relationship to Kagome. And with Kagome telling Koga that she does care for him but not in a couple sense but in a family sense!! (too many writers have her acting all air headed and oblivous to the fact that Inu does suffer) Thank you!! I am quite pleased and honoured to have come across your story!! I am wondering... how did Sess get another left arm?? Will there be a flash back to when Kagome was attacked? and the process Sesshoumaru went through and when Inu showed up and their talk and the actual scene with the blood promise oath.... these could be made into seperate chapters of combined into a few... I hope this helps out with the block.. if not then... Thank you for sharing this story with us your readers. About the writers blocks... Take a vacation.. sit back relax and Don't think about the story... just let it come to you when it is time .. I'm sure many of us readers can patiently wait for you to come out with another brillant chapter...

i believe that this is a funny story that shows great promise and look forwards to reading the rest when it comes up.
i spend hours reading off hte internet and only spend in reviews on a few stories that i think do really need a reply to.
this is a story worth readying, most likely over and over again.

Wow! I hope there's more coming this is a really cool story! ^.^V

this is good so far i like to concept. please update again soon.