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by LadyDragon1125

person samidina
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Just like to let u know that I like the story! But next time, make it a bit less painful for Sess k?

TX
Keep up the oh! so good work!^_^
person Rin-kun
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... Chapter One is pretty good. Poor Sesshoumaru... I think you have real talent!
person adry
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapters is great please update as soon as possible PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person Shadows_Corpse
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I like it, keep writing.
person melma
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't read Inuyasha, but your story is really interesting. This is a pairing I want to read. (Not InuxKagome)
Please go on with that.
It's reall good!
person noone
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meh! Naraku! What a jerk! Poor Sesshomaru. Oh wait, so what happened to Rin? T_T she's not dead is she? And sesshomaru will escape, right? Riiiiiiiiight? Please stop myself from hurting myself by pondering too much on what may happen by updating. Good jaob, looking forward to more, baibai!
person waterbottle
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was....intense. I like your details, and I'm interested in where the plot is going.
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truthfully, it's way too similar to the story 'Blood tastes so much sweeter' by the Gifted Ten for me to ever really enjoy it. And your grammar is pretty off base. It sounds like you're talking, not writing. The beginning is way purple too. Try to limit the descriptions to what's truly necessary. Sesshoumaru's character took a thorough beating in this fic as well. Overall, it was okay, but nothing I'd bother with ever again.
person Moonwraith
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! Awsome chapter...I hope you keep going with this. I've seen to many authors start this pairing and drop it after the first few chapters.
person CallistaSky
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! I loved it ;] And I can't wait to see what else happens. Please continue!