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for Falling for the Enemy

by kinoko

person hiddenone
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realy love this story. Please keep wrighting
person Kiki
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot I can't wait to read more
person nay
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. I thought this would be some sort of rape, since it's Naraku we're talking about, but you made it different. I like how some affection comes into the story, and intamcy taking place as well. You made Kagome choose between dire choices and I can't wait to read the rest.

nay
person kag_bank
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh i love this story,men!!!!!! ^^ update soon! pllllsss!
person jynkers
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
15 pages per chapter? Damn, girl, that's longer than any chapter I've ever written! No wonder you fic's so good, each part lasts long enough to hold you over until the next chapter. And you seem to be as fond of cliffhangers as I am. Well, at least mini-cliffies. I write the kind that makes your readers very, very mad at you. Of course, chaper 3 has the same effect, does it not? I so can't wait for chapter 4!

I wonder how long it will take Naraku to realize that she remembers everything, and doesn't really care. And what he'll do when he finds out. He could always pretend he doesn't know that she's pretending... but that could get rather confusing if not doen just right. But I'll bet good money that you're one of the rare authors that could pull it off. But then again, who knows what you'll do with your fic but you? I'll just have to wait and find out.

No worries. I'm patient.
person Kiki
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update real soon I love this pairing
person jynkers
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'v read this fic before, somewhere. Maybe FanFiction dot net? Anyway, update, k? The next chapter will be a good one, any reader knows that! So please, please, PLEASE update.
person chanda
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good, please update soon.

Chanda