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hello my name is christina i would like to know when your going to update. also i have a naraku kagome group on yahoo and if you have not already joined i would liketo ask you to. could you also post story there pleaseeeee. if any questions please email me. love your story.

i never thoughi would read a Naraku and Kagome fic but yours i like keep up the good work :P

MORE!!!!! UPDATE SOON WONDERFULLY WRITTEN~

Let me guess.
Your white aren't you.
I'm not trying to insult you in anyway for being white. This is just something I noticed.
Most authors that aren't Niggas, Hispanic, Asian, Indian or any other that I've forgotten, seems to think that Kagome, Inuyasha, Seshomaru, the other characters of Inuyahsa are white.
Do you think that the people in Japan are white? Do you think Jesus was white? Do you think that I'm white? The answer to all those questions are no.
Sure, you can get away with it if its an Alternate Universe story, but I don't think this is one.
If you are confused on where I got this from, the lines talking about her 'rosy nipples' told it all.
This is not a flame, but a simple reminder that this is not an all caucasion world that we live in.

Sincerly,
Ambereyes545 AKA Cookie

yeah i like this storie very unic(?) i have no clue how to spell it sorry anyways please update soon

HI! This is such a great story, I hope you plan on updating it soon!!

Holy sh*t! Is there a word that goes beyond love? If so that's how I feel about this! K+N is my favorite pairing and this is one of the great ones.

I'm dieing to know what will happen, will Naraku find out she's been playing along, will he decide to keep her for himself, what about her friends?

Please update as soon as possible.

Really great chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapters, so please update soon!

Wow, what a story, I do like how you portrayed these two. Very well done.

Chanda

Wow