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for Falling for the Enemy

by kinoko

schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this story, please write more.
person Caesar
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... You have done well. Caesar is very pleased. >]

I'm over joyed to see another chapter up. But I am more glad to hear that your personal life is doing well after your emotional turmoil. I have yet to have such a harsh break up, but I know that if I lost my loved one to such, I would not do so well, so soon. I hope things continue to remain steady.

I would love to see another chapter.

~Caesar
person sweetestchick
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm...ok. misread that authors note! that was Amber that said that, not u. My fault!
person sweetestchick
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*rereads author notes* Haha wow. not used to seeing ppl use the word nigga on MediaMiner! XD I presume u eithr hav alot of blk friends and/or u listen to rap. but anyways luv the story! Nar/Kag is my fave pairing. Keep up the good wrk! Later....
person Caesar
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, you held out long enough to give us this sumblime, but ever so slightly disapointing chapter.

Disapointing for good reasons though...

It's still just so very vague... and I need lcoser dammit!!! >_<

Please..... update soon and sate my needs! O_O
person Hee Hee
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That nag's nickname is cookie? Well, I think we should make her a fitting nickname..."Cookie nipples" >:C Hey, lol anyone could have rosy nipples or whatever the hell you put in that chapter. Cant remember, and I'm too lazy to look. Isn't just whites who have em. Natives can have them too :D
Its kind of awkward talking about nipples but that chick was slightly going overboard, ne?
person kerya
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you HAVE to review!!
this story has soo many yummy twists in it, and you write soo well!! please continue with this story...and soon!!!
^_^
-kerya
person kerya
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i lied...you HAVE too....UPDATE. not REVIEW.
ahh, cut me some slack, its 4 in the morning right now...lol.
but this is a really awesome story!!!
update asap

^____^
-kerya
person Mel
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great chapter. I was a little confused at first by the time skipping, but you really got the story going at the end. I hope you can get the next chaper out sooner than next year. I can't wait to see what happens next. You're doing a great job, so keep up the good work, and keep updating.
person Jaded Neko
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Took me forever to read up to now. Life is full of too many distractions. A nice twist here and there, nice to see Nar's still an evil lil' bastard.