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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story taptai! I read that you need help proofreading your fic, am I right? Well, I'd like to help if that's alright? I completely understand if you've accepted someone else's help. Keep up the cool storyline! It's awesome!
--------------Becca
--------------Becca
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update soon. I can't wait to see how this relationship develops. Is there going to be a fight? I want to read how well Taptai (nice insert) uses his bo, or if needs excessive training. Eagerly awaiting chapter 3!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an excelent chapter.... i'm liking this story even more..... I like Taptai's name..... i'm not very great at reviewing but i'll be sure to try and keep reviewing.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Hheheehe, funny chapter! Will Inu trained tap? I hope so. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chapter!!! Please continue!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i love this. Keep up the good work
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and interesting. I think it could be really sweet. I like the fact that Inu will hook up with another haynou. The only advise I would give you is to please separate your paragraphs. Trying to read one long paragraph is very painful to the eyes. So please take my advise and double space between paragraphs. ^_^ Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so fer..... i usually don't like storys with original characters..... which is hypocritical of me since i can only write a story if i add an original char..... i can't wait to read the next chap, I'd really like to see how this story progresses