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please continue this story,i hate the thought of taptai being dead. Ive alreadyread this story about 5 times but i dread reading the ending because taptai dies. Please have him somehow stay alive or something. Oh and i loved this story it is seriously one of my favorites and i cant stand it ending like this.so plz continue this story.

yes plz bring him back, great i feel like im gonna cry. The romance turn into a tragedy

CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!! Taptai can't die, damn you!! This is so unfair, you must continue this story... (I am damning you simply because story rocks and you can't kill Taptai) And if you are not going to bring him back then at least have the last chapter be something about InuYasha and what he thinks and feels about it. That way I can really think of it as truely finalized! Otherwise it's just going to be a knawing, terribe, bleak, black hole in my head, making me think of all the ways this story could have ended or all the ways I could rip Naraku to pieces! Please don't do this to Nead! Please, she begs of you! Please? Anyway, awsome story, I really hope you continue. Really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really hope you continue.

Of course you need to continue! That was the most random ending I have ever read! Please continue.

You Have Got to be KIDDING!! Finish You are just getting started good on this story. Also as a long term cat owner it will take more then a drunk in the ocean to kill a cat. Your character is a cat demon. He is very much alive. Every time I bathe my cats they try to prove they can walk on water and a bannsee has nothing on a wet cat. I look forward to the next chapter and a very pissed off cat! Keep up the good work you have put in to this story.

omg....you made me cry so hard... T_T i hate you! but i still love the story. even if it does end here (which would make me very sad) i am still going to tell everyone i know to read it T_T

EPILOGUE!!... THAT'S THE WORD I COULDN'T REMEMBER!!... hehehe.... figures it would take me 24 hours to remember a word, i always remember things when i no longer care about them

he, he DIED! YOU WENCH! BRING HIM BACK! HE'S NOT ALLOWED TO DIE! (if u can't tell, i want this story to continue)

For the most part I found your story to be entertaining. A little slow in some places, yet I kept reading to see what would happen. I thought you did a fairly good job with keeping Inuyasha in character, which I know is hard to do. I found Taptai’s past to be rather odd, yet again I continued to read to see how all of this would turn out. I have to say, I thought the ending was very contrived. I would actually call it lame. For all points of your story, Naraku hasn’t even shown up. There was no hint of him nearby, or that the group was even searching for him. It truly just feels like a ploy writer’s use. Instead of it coming out of the blue, at least let the reader know that for some reason Naraku is surfacing. Even pushing that aside, they were suppose to be in a cave right? This other notion then that Taptai or Inuyasha for that matter didn’t notice a tentacle coming into the cave, or through the ground, or however it made it into the cave is just bizarre. Since for that matter, cats are more sensitive to vibrations than dogs. Taptai, no matter how hazy he might have been would have noticed something was wrong. The ending falling into the ocean thing… wow. Shouldn’t Taptai’s main goal have been to make it back to where Inuyasha was? So he’s getting pushed away, put not making any of his own headway back to where he wants to be? He’s really that bad at fighting? And now he drowns in the ocean? Again, most people aren’t caught off guard by the ocean. It’s something people smell, hear, and feel before they actually see it. Maybe somehow if he fell over a cliff of some kind it might seem slightly more plausible; however, I would think he would have noticed well in advance that Naraku was pushing him closer to water. Effectively, your story feels unfinished. Maybe with some revisions of the ending fight scene you could resolve it, but I would be more inclined to believe that it would require a couple more chapters to actually bring the story to a proper climax and resolution.

that was a good chapter... pooe Taptai.... i think it would be nice if you made a (dangit i forgot what the word was, i want to say prologue but that aint right), anyway i think one last chapter just (aww man i forgot another word).... i'll try one more time, i think you should write one last chapter that basically goes over the after effects and how Inuyasha is dealing and stuff, cause the way this chapter ended it just didn't feel like the end... if you don't want to thats fine, I'll live.... I loved this story