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for The Unknown Warrior

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story, i would like to have an epilouge or sequel where they explain a bit more to kagome's mom and where they find out if any of the youkai in the city are ones that they knew before.
person Diane
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, I think this is the 2nd or 3rd time I've read it, as a FYI type thing you have seen in a bunch of places where saw would be a better word choice, like in this sentence in chapter 16; She looked at the clock, and freaked when she seen the time. it would read better as; She looked at the clock, and freaked when she saw the time. This is just 1 instance there are others scattered throughout the fic. Hope this is helpful.
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was awsome I loved it a lot wow the story was good
wowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowow that's all I got to say
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of all the amazing Sesshomaru/Kagome stories you've written, this has been and will always be my favorite. There's just something about the way it flows and how you wrote it. No matter how many times I read it, each time is new to me. It is an honor every time I look upon your stories; it makes everything I write look like cow-dung, lol. Continue writing, and I hope that you'll never lose your passion and flame; their what make your stories all yours. --Sorry for all the sap, I got carried away, ^^'
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person the Empress
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story...but *sigh* it was not long enough. It had not enough of that yummy sesshy goodness.hehe.. But great nonetheless. Oh and house of lemons is great too *sigh*.. ^.^
person Vague
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, now thats a great fic. i know sesshomaru is ooc but its totally acceptable. after going about pretending to be stone, he is casted into it and suddenly he realises that being stoney isnt all that great. this fic was so sensual i completely enjoyed reading it and combinedwith madman it makes you one of my fav authors. keep writing and ill try to review as much as possible

Vague
person Tenno
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT!!! ^^ I started it yesterday and I just HAD to read the rest today. Though short it may be, it is fantabulous!
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. Ever think of a sequel or something? =)