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for Unlovable?

by rubyhunny

person Lady_Minokee
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was a great story i loved it
person Amanda
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved it!
i absolutely enjoy fics that have kagome and inuyasha as best friends
perhaps i will write one of them as best friends soon!!
woo hoo!
^_^
great story!
person Paradiseboy
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You still got it.I think your repeating yourself too often.Take note of that.Like I said, try other animes
person Destiny Froste
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really love the story. The only critisism I would give on the matter was that Kagome went from depressed about Kouga to in love with Inuyasha too quickly for the story (it seems fickle if someone is reading it unbiasly of who the characters are), perhaps you could have put a little more from Kagome's perspective at the beginning of him not just being her protector, but also that she had been supressing love for him for some time. Otherwise, WONDERFUL story.
person kinky lurker
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* well, that was delicious. i liked that you wrote it so they weren't just fucking randomly. i liked that they were friends before they were lovers. and the crowd cries, "more!"

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person Josh
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey do you plan on writing more for this title because it is a good story and you should keep going with it.... e-mail me with your thoughts
person inufan625
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll be looking forward to to more...
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i really liked that one. i thought it was sad how she thought that no one could love her. is it a one-shot or will there be more chapters?
person nina
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wat a niCe stOry !! :D

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