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OMG TWG PLEZZZ UP-DATE

Okay have I told you how awesome this fic is yet? I haven't well whatever... This is one of the most beautifully written inu/kag pieces I have seen in a long time. Please continue to update! I loved chp. 4, human Inu and Kagome going to the fair, so kawaii!

WOW!!!! You totally rock!!!! This is getting better and better every time I go to read it!! I'm beginning to rank it up there with others I admire greatly like : The Lucky Ones, Broadway series, Unleashed (on FF), Inufan625 (author), Kagome and the Capt Pirate, Silver Hanyou, plus many more.. You really have a talent there!! The story is progressing beautifully, Not too fast and Not too slow. You add a wonderful mix of descriptions and events together to create a masterpiece!! WOW!!! I love it!!!! I like how you have them exploring each other and not jumping into having sex right after the words I love you.. like how many other writers seem to do. Thank you for your most excellent work (and for the help with the cousin issue) Please keep up the Excellent work!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!

I love it! I hope you'll update soon!

I love it I am glad that you decided to keep writing...

Update soon please,
Chanda

I'm glad you've continued this. I will look forward to more excellent chapters

Your story is good but some of your paragraphs are way too long. It is hard to read long blocks of text on a computer screen. Keep your paragraphs short and keep putting a blank line between them. Thanks.

Very good story so far. Hope you continue the story further. Very good potential downthe road for conflicts and some good battle scenes. Though things need to work out ofcourse. ^^;

wow! Very nice. Very thoughtful. I liked it! Inuyasha's feelings really shined through and of course I love fluff. Lovely. Keep writing.

that was the most romatic story of inuyasha and kagome i have ever
read in the hole world i hope you keep going you are relly good i
i relly mean it