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person inufan625
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Five days huh? Go Kagome and Dog boy. I wish I could get an InuYasha for my very own... That was a great chapter and the lemon was hot without being too vulgar. I eagerly await your next chapter.
person ME
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO 5 days!!!!! boy can they go at it for long or what lol why are they glowing?? update soon!
person Takara (too lazy to login again)
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cough cough* FIVE DAYS!!!! OMFG! *dies* Wow! I was thinking like two and a half... Dang are they LUCKY gosh. Well I am loving this, I can just tell Miroku-sama is gonna get in deep water (with him and his big mouth), lol. Anyway as ever keep up the good work and I will be sure to review your next chappie.

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The lemon was very well written, it was detailed without being completely vulgar, which is just how I like it. *wink wink* Also what about pups? I personally think you should wait a bit, there are too many stories that completely focus around Kagome being pregnant. (But from your earlier chapters I don't think we are gonna have to worry about that being the case right?) Still I DO think it would be cute for Sango and Miroku to get together and have a kid. I just think they would make awesome parents.
person PJ
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!!! I am glad Inuyasha finally figured out that Kikyo didn't really love him but only really wanted him so she could be rid of the jewel and her duties. I think that is partly why she got weaker is because she wanted to be a normal woman and was tired of being a miko. I never did believe that crap about her getting weaker because she loved Inuyasha.... Kagome loves Inuyasha, Shippo and even Kouga (friend) and she is not weaker. I am glad Inu & Sessy came to a truce and stuff. Now on to the mating ritual... wow 5 days!! I figured 3 at the most but 5 wow.... both of them have big hearts and are powerful. Hope Miroku doesn't get himself hurt I just know he is going to say something. BTW loved the bath scene where Miroku got into "hot water" LOL .... keep writing update soon
person inufan625
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sango... Looks like Kagome and Inu have some new butt kicking power. I still love it and can't wait for more.
person 1woof1
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is what I call a love scene. A mix of all types of passion making is just what the doctor ordered. Keep up the amazing work!!!
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I thought that was so cute how Sess asked Kagome to give Rin "the talk". I had always wondered who he would have do that... Anyways keep up the good work please update soon, I am dying here waiting!
person inufan625
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I left the last review before reading the newest chapter. I really liked this one too. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait until you update again! I love how your showing the changes in Inu-kun and Kagome-chan's personalities. I find that really sweet! I can't wait to see what happens with Sesshy-kun, lol.
person inufan625
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still loving it. Keep up the good work and I eagerly await your next chapter. I wonder if you will go with one of the "Standard" Rituals, a tweaked version, or something of your own design...