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person Chio
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good Chappie! Thanks for updating so soon. The battle was short but well narrated. We know Kagome will find that the well works, ok? But I want to know if Seshoumaru will surpass the mating record his brother established...XD Lemony..lemony...who can say "I don´t like it"?...Your story has a perfect balance. Great job!
person Inuyashasmate
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up!!! Great job loved this chapter!!! Well update soon....
person Takara
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chats* Naraku's dead Naraku's dead Naraku's dead... I could go on forever! Yay! I hope this doesn't mean the fic is winding down to an end. This is really one of those stories I wish would go on forever! Anyway I loved this latest chappie it was very sweet! I liked the whole dream thingie with Mindoriko, seemed very fitting. Well anyway I can't wait to see what happens back at Sesshy's castle! Update soon!
person Chio
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Please update soon.
person Alvida
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read the whole thing (chs 1-12) and found it all very enjoyable but two lines really stood out:

“Pups, revenge – it’s a fairly short list.”

Miroku shouted after them, “Don’t forget to stop and *bond* in the forest! You don’t want to lose any power!”
person PJ
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I really like this one.... and this last chapter was so cool. I love that Kikyou can't figure out that Kagome is not helpless. So I guess she hasn't seen Kagome kill any demons in the last couple of days. I also like how you have the higher level demons coming to help. I somehow think Kikyou is going to try something though so I think the others should treat her as more like a threat.... I am not saying attack her but I wouldn't put it past her to mess up the battle just so she could get the revenge herself. She did after all give the shards to Naraku so I wouldn't doubt it if she tried to take them from Kagome again and give them to Naraku to complete the jewel. Just so she could try to purify the jewel herself. Kikyou is rather "full of herself" Anyway keep writing this is great update soon.
person inufan625
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naraku is dead! Keep up the good work and Kagome is luckiest girl ever... I need a dog boy of my own *sigh*
person inufan625
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm not alone in looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen with Kikyou and with Naraku when he comes. Kepp up the good work and update as soon as you can....
person Takara (once again to lazy to login)
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, sorry just thinking what an odd group everyone makes. That would be a trange sight all of them entering the village together. Hehe...

But DAMMIT! ANYTHING but Kikyo she scares me! Oh well she'll help with Naraku's defeat right? Right? Please! As long as she leaves Inu-kun and Kagome-chan alone I am fine.

This next chapter is looking to be the best yet! Please continued soon!
person fan of kagome
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG five days? but that was only like five parographes? well if it was only five days then do they have a puppie yet? if they will in the future then how about the baby has dark blue hair, black ears and regulare blue eyes? and can you make it so that naraku(i hate him he is a vary vial creature no i mean thing) die from there mating bond or because of that they are stronger. think about it plezzzzz?
anyway updatesoon luv-ya
BYE!!!