rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed the story, plot line was very good, I am guessing you wrote this before the final act came out, or you just prefer to write your own story line...it was great!! There were a small amput of grammatical problems, but compared to mast other fics I have read, and the fact that this was your first, no to mention that I would prolly make the same mistakes when writing, it was well written... Plus j have read several of your othr fics and know that you have improved immensely!!!!! Congrats on a job well done and a wonderful story, I wish you much succes in the future!! INUblngswitKAG

The story was great. The writing unsurpassed. I do have to say it was kinda short. I bet if u tried you could have had it as long as the rest of your stories.I do hope u keep writing so we can all keep reading.

~~Sieg

So far I love this story. It was a wonderful idea especially about Inuyasha being a virgin. I always pictured him as one. I only have one problem with this story.... whats with the "this Sesshoumaru" thing? It doesn't really make any sence and is kind of anoying to read and think about him saying. Maybe it just needs re worded or something, I dont know. All I know is its driving me batty. Just wanted to let you know. I will review again when I am trough reading the story.

OMG!!!!!!!, I think this is one of the best fics I have EVER read and I have read alot. I wish you would do one on Rin and Shippo's story too, though you probably wouldn't even if I begged....*begging shamelessly here.."Please, petty please"...* I love how you ended it. I am a big fan of happy endings. Though I almost cried while reading the end of it and the epilogue. It was soo sweet yet sad. I hate that everyone had to eventually die. I almost cried when you started talking about that, but at least they will be reincarnated soom day. Any way this story was very well written and eventually Sessy quit saying that damn line I disslike so much...this Sesshoumaru... I still dont get it? I loved all your OC and how Inuyasha and Kagome seemed to take on some of each others trates as their aura's started bonding and how Kagome zaped Kouga to his sences. It was a really wonderful and addictive story. I read it ALL in ONE sitting. As of right now I have been up over 24hrs several of those reading this wonderful work of yours. Now I am going to go to bed and hve yummy dreams curtesy of your fic. Keep up the good work, your writing skills seem to amaze me the more I read.

OH MY GOSH !!
i love this story, it was soo nice. And although it took me a while to read, i reallyl iked it. It has a very nice moral to it, and is very meaningful. And the names that you came up with are very cool, and sound like something actually in InuYasha. But i was wondering.. How do you pronounce Sajjanneba's name ?

I love this story. were does Kirara live? does she live with Shippou and his mate Rini or Sesshomaru and his mate? Plus did Rini have any kids when she mated with Sippou? Are you going to do a sequel to this story. Plus I loved that song She's Like the Wind from Dirty Dancing. PLEASE e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com

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Sarah Zitter

I love this story and i want to know about what happened to shippou and rin please

It was a very great story.

wow, that's an amazingly awesome story! I'm reading your Live and Let die series now :) I can't wait to read more, but for now I must sleep!
<3
Angel

I dont understand y u r such a good writer ur like good wit detail, lemons, and creativity damn :)