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for The House Of Lemons

by TheHentaiHarlots

person SilentDeath
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have done my job....:) SilentDeath has made people sick! *Grins really wide!* Muwahahahahahahahaha.....ahahaha....haha...ha... *Ahem* Sorry. I am glad you all like our house of lemons. Oh and by the way. I will never write a one-shot with Inuyasha and Kiki. I really hate that pairing.
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA!!! I LOVED this chapter! Take THAT Inuyasha!
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You guys seriously rock. There should be a shrine built for the two of you and I shall go there to worship everyday.
person Cherubael
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is definitely one of the better stories out there. I commend you. Funny thing is, I saw Inu Yasha tonight and it was when Naraku gets his new body and I was just thinking about tentacles...

Near the end, Naraku's dialogue seems a bit out of character. Naraku rarely curses, even in times of great pain/distress and thus unlikely to do it in times of pleasure. Also, how he called Kagome "Miko" reminded me of La Blue Girl, probably one of those old hentais you've watched.

Time to wrap this up. Marvelous, hopefully there'll be more short stories after these.
person Silent Death
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE! I am a DAMN YANKEE and PROUD OF IT!!!! Yes, I think history would have been better off with dirty people like me. LOL I am glad you liked it Rin. I have a good one coming up soon. It will be kind of gross. I am going to be brave and put it on anyways. I am just a nasty and gross girl like that . Lets just say I......have....a...morbid and funny since about the passing. LOL I think I just gave it away. LOL


Silent Death
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Listen here ya 'damn yankee'! That was one HOT fic! Yummy to my tummy. Threesome's are so much fun. I loved the way you made Sess into a sexy beast full of hentai naughtiness. Such a sexy professor! I'm as southern as they come and I have to say that if all yankee's were as fun as you, then there would never have been a cival war. Everyone would have been too busy fucking! LOL!

Rin
person kiotana
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me love the house of lemons! keep it coming^^
person Luna
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another sexy one, mm threesomes :) i have a suggestion, can you guys put more dirty talk into your fics? its a total turn on!! anyway, keep em coming (no pun intended)
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Kags21
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love both you guys writting and I have a request Can you do one with Kagome and Naraku in modern times either one of you please.