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*evil laugh* i just loved that^^

as usual i enjoyed your story and glad you're back and writing again. as an optimist, you're a very talented housewife and i always love your lemons...

I like the good/bad Naraku-Kagome fics when he makes her want it......

This last one (spoils of war) was beautiful. A work of art. Of course the rest is good too but this one was so romantic and...well...I'm a romantic fool. About the Naraku/Kagome pairing. Make him a bad-good guy, no rape. There are only two good Naraku fics out there (Sleeping with the enemy and Raging desire). Thank you very much for writing us these wonderful stories.

Great work. I vote for the Kagome/Naraku pairing as well. But it should be consensual and Naraku should be a bad-good guy. Maybe in present day, something like he is a gang leader and befriended with Kagome, the girlfriend of a rival gang. Her Boyfriend cheats on her and he is *helping* her through the hard times. Well, it´s up to you. Couldn´t come up with a better idea.

I love your lemons! I can't wait for the next one ^^. Now, I shall go to bed. Not only is it far too late, but I need sleep. I'm just glad that I will have yummy dreams tonight ;)

I'm going to go ahead and say that I luv your work. These stories are very erotic, although, the Miroku one was quite disturbing. Still I give you props for all your hard work.
~peace

Kawaii Girl, I have never seen Nip/tuck. I have heard of it, but never seen it. So no, I never got my inspiration off of it. I am not offended by what you said. My mind runs in a very morbid way. If I made you sick, I did my job. *Grins* I wrote it just for that. I am glad you are waiting for my other updates. At least I didn't lose you as a reader. :) Thanks for your review!


SilentDeath

I didn't read the whole chapter (I didn't really want to get into that), but the parts I did read (the beginning and ending) kind of seemed like it was taken/an idea from Nip/Tuck. The episode that aired last Tuesday (October 25th) was, in part, about a mortician who had taken limbs from four deceased women and attached them to his deceased sister's head. He had been in love with her while she lived and wanted to be with her forever. Like Miroku, he was the best at what he did, and was also quite a loner. No one really payed attention until the body parts began to go missing. Well, to make a long story short, he attached the parts to his sister and was sleeping with her. Though he was caught and placed in jail (3-5 years), the basics of the stories are simular. I was just wondering if 1) you watch that show and/or 2) if that's where you got the inspiration for this chapter.

Well, in any case, this chapter was ok (a little disturbing, but not shocking). Good for Halloween though! ^_^ Hopefully the next chapter you put out will be less... crazy (no offense). Awaiting the next chapter to all your fics... *wavies*

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

LOL I never knew something could be hot & creepy......