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for The House Of Lemons

by TheHentaiHarlots

person Kellie
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was freakin' hot. Makes me wish I was in the story. Keep up the wonderful work
person monecque
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You guys are on fire , fire i tell you.
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man the dog one was FREAKING GREAT!!! You guys really know how to keep a fresh, new and seriously twisted take on these stories and I adore them all. This was really hot and naughtly and I really liked how you kept in, how should I say, a more real slant, I really enjoyed this. Also how you had him introduce himself was very funny and the ending was cute too. The only thing I would note is that Sesshomaru (since Inu doesn't do dog) looks more like a Samoyed than a white German Shepard. Of course I am somewhat biased as I have a Samoyed and I think his cute white ears are exactly like Inuyasha's, plus the long white fur. Here is a link and tell me these cuties don't look like Fluffy except for the read eyes and the sammy smile. http://www.samoyed.org/ows/sledding.html
But I love what you gyrls are doing please keep up the good work I just adore this story:)
person InuGrrrl
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**To Break a Curse**

That was REALLY good, lol. I started reading a smiliar story
on here (forgot the name) & both are really great (the other
one had no hentai tho). Well done & kudos for having the
balls to write such a fic.
person Luvspanky
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so very much! They give me VERY creative ideas. I think I'm starting to scare my boyfriend! Rin, I especially love your stories with Anubis. Could you do a threesome with Kagome, Anubis, and Sesshoumaru? I would worship you in all your greatness for eternity!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As completely perverted as this may sound, I found 'To Break a Curse' to be one hot fuckin fic! Hat's off to my partner in crime for her wonderfully hentai mind!

Rin
person lia
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you two are great, simply great. i can't get enough of the stories. please continue to write more because there are readers that love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Evellin
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ladies!!! Well done!!!!

I love this whole idea of you two working together to put several Hentai one-shots together! What a great idea! I must say I love the whole Naraku/Kagome pairing. Yes, Naraku is a bad guy, but you can’t help but notice how H-O-T, hot he is! And he does have tentacles….that could prove very handy in some…:clears throat:: SITUATIONS! (By the way, the old-school tentacle Hentai was awesome!!!! LOVED it!!!!)
Well ladies, I am VERY excited for the next one-shot, I look forward to it very much.
I hope you both had a great Turkey-day!!!!
~>Evellin<~
person JazzyJazz
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Wow!! These stories are great!! I went back and read everyone. So I decided to just review the last chapter praising the both of you. These stories really are good. I mean if I had a big enough vocabulary word for them, I'd say it. But, no word I know would do any of these stories justice. MAGNIFICENT WORK!!! ^^ I hope one day to write a lemon as well as these. Sadly, I am but a beginner!! Keep up the good work!! Can't wait for the next chap!!! *~*JazzyJazz*~*
person sendosha
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*howling in response* That was great! Finally Koga had his chance, too and Naraku the voyeur! Just hilarious!