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for The House Of Lemons

by TheHentaiHarlots

person sauncha
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the rin sessh story! Thanks for giving a happy ending :)
person RJ
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Madness of the Mating Frenzy would have been better without the tacked on happy ending. Dark fics are better when everything doesn't turn out okay in the end,and the ending was a bit abrupt.

It had taken a long time for them to heal from the aftermath of his mating frenzy

How? It would have been more interesting to see them go through this than skipping right to the ultra happy ending. I liked it up until the end.
person Kakumei
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Despite the apparently mature content and sheer darkness of the story
I can't help but say that this was very... pretty. The detail, the emotion,
all of the aspects that made this a wonderful chapter. I loved the way
you described Sesshoumaru while he was in his lust-crazed mindset and
I especially enjoyed the way you portrayed the usually overlooked
relationship between Sesshoumaru and Rin.
person SilentDeath
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHE! I loved it Rin! Very good. You are doing much better than mine. *Sigh* I am not having a very good time at writing my one for Kag/Sess. It is the ending. Not a good one. So, I am putting it on hold and working on the next chapter of In Under Deep. Need to get that one out first anyways. Good work! I do have that habbit. I tend to have my sick side rub off of people. I must say that in my morbid mind, I laughed at some of the scenes that would make most sick. But that is just me!


Death
person Sins_Spider
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome like always great detail Rin cant wait for the next one
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that you didn't like the ending to Madness, but I disagree with you completely. A dark fic can have a happy ending. My story, Tortured Love didn't end darkly. Taboo, yes, but not dark, and it turned out okay. There is always a light at the end of the tunnel. Besides, I simply don't do sad endings. I hate stories that don't end on a happy note and I refuse to write one. They leave me feeling all yucky. I can still appreciate your opinion though, and I thank you for taking the time to review.

Rinseternalsoul
person Rawben
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what is this? a happy ending? in the house of lemons?? awesome. ;) great job!!
person Eila
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
request: can you guys do a SessKag beastialy one? like the inu kag one but this time in the past... sesshomaru has a curse and turns into his miniture form(but bigger then a wolf ) of his true one and kagome takes of him into the group inu yasha doesn't now its his brother because his scent is altered. and when sesskag do it... after he will turn back and do it again
person Jacque
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Rin! I love all these lemons you two wrote, though Kagome's bag of goodies is my fav, hee hee, inu's reaction to the "fake purple cock" was priceless. Would you do a sequel to that, pretty please (begs on knees)? If possible, would you also do either a Kouga/Ayame or adult Rin/Kohaku ones? Especially the second one, please, there are no quality work on them and since you are sucha talented author I would like to see your work on them please. Well great job and am really anticipatingg the next chapters.
person Pat
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!