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for The House Of Lemons

by TheHentaiHarlots

person Alone
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!! Really it had a great ending also!!!! Very original thinking. Outside of the box kind of thing. LOL. I hope you don't get to much hate mail for it, but if there even on this site let alone reading your story then I don't think you should have to much trouble!!!! I luv you two. Untill next time.
person demonlordlover
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Heaven and Hell fic. The way Sesshomaru was portrayed as teh devil is very fitting for his character, not to mention the literal translation of his name. This would make a great story, more than a one-shot should you ever get the time.
person luckyducky7too
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Though I'm not really into Kagome and Sesshomaru pairings, this chapter was really well done. Sesshomaru really does suit the part of 'dark lord'.
person Bibsta
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was dark.. but sooo touching. all for her little brother. *sniff* it would be very tempting to be Shessy's sex toy. idk if i would do it though. still it was yum tastic!
person Aria-Chan
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Abso-fucking-lutely Rin!!!! Damn Girl, if you have to pick one guy to be the devil..... I think a lot of virgins (and women) would say bubaai God, Hello Devil *sees a scene in her head where the cold and ruthless Sesshoumaru the Devil and Ruler of Hell runs like a bat out of hell from a mad mob of lustful virgins screaming 'HELP ME!!!! SAVE ME!!!'* *laughs*

Looking forward to the next one.... Thank you.

P.s. Galaxy Gladiators was really great as well Rin! My favorite! I love Anubis! Could you maybe do another one-shot with him?
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations to my partner in crime for a job well done! This is a truly wonderful piece of writing. You tipped the scale in sexy angst while still giving us our happy ending. I loved this one-shot and I know that anyone else who reads it will love it too! Great job.

P.S.: S.D.= If the devil is Sesshomaru, then God help me, I'd better get used the the heat.
person Ren
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey it wasn't bad, thanks a lot for making one about Sesshoumaru and Rin. ^_^ I must say I couldn't have done it any better. Great work, keep it up...err in your other chapters of course. Don't mind me if I don't read too many of them...because I'm not too big of a fan of Sess/Kagome. Sorry. ^-^; I don't mean that as a offendment either. Thanks again and bye!
person Kage Otome (NSI)
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heaven beside you, hell within:

I loved this, Sesshoumaru as the devil, sinfully sexy! *grins* I can't wait to read more from you two.
person inuyoukai8
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd! You are so freakin insanely awesome! I love your work! I can't wait for more!
person Sin_Spider
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH DANM thats hot now im all bothered you out did yourself death and id have to agree with rin REALLY EASY ^.^ goofy grin