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for Stalker?

by ElysianMusic

person sma_orlando
schedule December 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this cute story.
person unknown
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT'S IT!! YOU JUTS LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!! Please up-date soon im so courious to what will happen next!!
person Dante
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tricks? Can't wait to see what kind of tricks.

D_
person HJ11
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please upd8 soon!
person Kags21
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please uipdate
person Dante
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An evil place to stop a good chapter.

D_
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm interesting plot... I liked it even though it was kinda hard to read due to the way the site layed it out I think. I would recommend getting a Beta... they can help you with how to make your story even better. I suppose at times it seemed repetitive, but there is still so much you can put into the story still. Do not be afraid to use description. Otherwise I love the idea, and I look forward to seeing what you have planned to do with it.