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for The One Who Heals My Heart

by AngelEvie

schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story! i hope you write more like it.
person Dee Dee
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! That was AMAZING I've never read anything like it! I think that you should write a sequel it could be about their kids. If you do email me. By the way I loved all the songs in your story!
person inu_lover1978
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic.
person Phelony
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read every chapter you wrote, word for word, twice.
I love this story! Beautifully written, and you deffinately
left me wanting more with your 'Epologue'. Sequel is
deffinately requested! Excellent Job!
person howlingblue
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!

I really enjoyed the plot, and the song inserts were really good...

Btw, if you needed a place to stick that one shot, you left a plot hole open with the jewel..... it never did make its way back to Kagome, lol..
person DeronsDemonGurl
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a really great story. I hope that you do that one-shot eventually. I bet it will be good. I loved the story. It was awesome. XD
person janomaru
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic please update soon or i may resort to violence
person inufan625
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute. I am really enjoying it and look forward to teh next chapter. I want to know what Inu is going to be and Kagome too
person penpaninu
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fukumaden is a real japanese band? cool!
person Inuyouki
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ihave a suggestion for your next song... its by Live when dolphins cry heres the lyrics ( it would be perfect for your story.
The way you're bathed in light
Reminds me of that night
God let me down into your rose garden of trust
And I was swept away
With nothin' left to say
Some helpless fool
Yeah I was lost in a swoon of peace
You're all I need to find
So when the time is right
Come to me sweetly, come to me
Come to me

Love will lead us, alright
Love will lead us, she will lead us
Can you hear the dolphin's cry?
See the road rise up to meet us
It's in the air we breathe tonight
Love will lead us, she will lead us

Oh yeah, we meet again
It's like we never left
Time in between was just a dream
Did we leave this place?
This crazy fog surrounds me
You wrap your legs around me
All I can do to try and breathe
Let me breathe so that I
So we can get together!

Love will lead us, alright
Love will lead us, she will lead us
Can you hear the dolphin's cry?
See the road rise up to meet us
It's in the air we breathe tonight
Love will lead us, she will lead us

Life is like a shooting star
It don't matter who you are
If you only run for cover, it's just a waste of time
We are lost 'til we are found
This phoenix rises up from the ground
And all these wars are over