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for Captured

by DarkLove

person InuGrrrl
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Really like your story alot.
person Rhia
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist with Naraku. Come on Kagome you can sense that bastard!
person mia
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAaaaaYYYYY!!!!!! i love it!!!! update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!~please~
person lithium88
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww.. sweet chapter. DAMN THAT NARAKU! .. crazy bastard. anyway!! great chappy, loving the story!!! Please continue writing, and updating!! til ur next chapter, take care!!! ^_^ BYE!
lith*
person TricksterGoddess
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write faster!!
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh that sucks... poor kagome!
person D.I.
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRR...i LOVE the way you made naraku scare the shit outta Kagome i mean now Kagome's gonna be afriad of everyone even inuyasha and then...ARGGGG just plz update! i just this story!
person mia
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i really liked it!!! update soon!!!
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great updates. Naraku is a real bastard!
Poor InuYasha...he was falling so hard too!
Can't wait for the next!
person ltihium88
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love chapters 10 and 11!!! this story is coming along great!! keep up the wonderful work, and please update soon!!! it's gettin' good! haha, well take care, cheers!
lith*