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for Captured

by DarkLove

person InuGrrrl
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dayuuuuuuuuuuuum.

That's so cold! Good chappies!
Poor InuYasha...just as he was gonna
tap the putang, Naraku had to do some
old fucked up shit. Grrr

Great story tho, I love the writing. You
know how to keep it fun & entertaining!
person dark_lady_69*NSI*
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT STOP THERE YOU ARE E.V.I.L, YOU HEAR ME E.V.I.L UPDATE SOON OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
person lithium88
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH! *cries* That was a great chapter! You're story is coming along quite well, i love the new twists you keep giving it. It's really a joy to read. I couldn't believe that last twist you slipped in at the end, how very Evil!! ^_^ but.. now the plot thickens... even more. Can't wait to see how these turn of events affect the story and it's characters, so until your next chappy. Take care!
lith*
person chanda
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice cliffy... Look forward until your next chapter.

Chanda
person mia
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah! that chapter was sooooooo intense!!! I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon and keep up the great work!!!!!!!
person iy_lvr
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww. I love it. please continue^^
person Kat
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE write more!!!
person hm...
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN! I guess... I'll reviewww.... AWESOME JOB UPDATES NOWW!!
person kogas_angel
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU YOU EVIL EVIL PERSON!!!! lolz im just jokin i luv ya but hurry with the next chappie plz
ur fan^^ kogas_angel*
person Kayla
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make more I love it!!!!!!!!Make more really really really really soon!