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for Captured

by DarkLove

person Spiders
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D': Please don't stop the story, It's a great story! I think that the only reason it has gotten so few reveiws lately is because it too you a while to update...
person taro_gurl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
too short and simple. A decnt plot but that all you have going for you and this story. I skip to the last chapter and your note. Please DON't continue this.
person Lizeth
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please,don't stop.
I really want to know what happens next.
person Rachie
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! And I am glad that you have decided to continue! Please update soon.
person sam
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!! ADDY TP THE STORY!!!! i usually dont put reveiws in... but omg!! ADDY TP IT!!! NOW
person Loserbean
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want you to continue it!
person Marisaiko
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know i didn't review your story and I should have. I'm sorry. I hope you'll continu your story.It's very good and I want to know how it ends. I'll be waiting your updates...

Marisaiko
person Rachie
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont mean to be rude in this review but I do want to tell you exactly what I think. I am sorry you feel like you should stop writing just because you only got 1 review for a single chapter. Not much really happened. There is not much we can really tell you. What happened in the 19th chapter was unexpected and to me actually seemed kinda short. Maybe that is because only one main event happened. Yes, we could tell you "Omg, that was awesome please update ASAP!" but that gets kinda old. It has much less meaning when you say it to authors when you are just trying to get them to continue writing the next chapter and actually have nothing of importance to say. I am sorry I didnt review but I usually only review one to three times in a fic if at all. I have been enjoying this fic and will be very disappointed if you dont continue it. So please dont stop writing Captured because of this!
person che lee
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good you can't stop this story....-_-
person LEA
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DONT U dare! please!