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dude i love it!!!
the bit of kouga bashing and teasing was great! he can be a real dick sometimes.
will youkai inuyasha kill him too because kouga likes Kagome? also, no mercy for
kikyou! and........i think inuyasha in youkai form is so freaking hot! (google eyes)
keep writing and i will keep reviewing. i stayed up till 1:30 am just to read all chapters.
loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit!!!!!

Hi!
One of the best stories I have ever read so far. Great ideas. Really love it!!!!

Damn, that's just wrong. Poor Inu & where
the heck did Kouga come from? lol

Great!!! as usual!! keep up the great work and keep those chapters coming!!!
♥ MIA

Hi!! It's great. I thought that you were really giving up your fanfic. I'm glad I was wrong. ^^ As for last week of college, I understand perfectly. I'm in college too and this last week was pretty hard on me too.

I'm glad you updated. I was wondering if Koga would be in your fic. Now I have my answer I guess. Oh and I really love Sabin!!! He's so cute and funny. He's like a smaller version of InuYasha!! I guess he is a little bit like Shippo too. I hope you'll have nice holidays. ^^
(I'm sorry if I made grammar or orthograph mistakes. My first language is french and I'm still learning english. It was pretty late when I wrote this too... ^^' lol)
Update soon!!

Ja ne!!

I LOVE IT !!!!!
I can't wate for the next chp.
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!!! GET THE NEXT CHP UP SOON!!!
{get on neys and beg}Please1 ^_~

yes... dont continue writing your story it SUCKS! am I encouraging you to continue writing?!? its my game plan!
no really I totally love this story so WRITE WRITE WRITE! and school sucks so take it easy and WRITE WHEN YOU CAN!!!!

yaaaaay so ur continuing?! i'm so pleased! can't wait to see the next cahp! still checking everyday!

its ok, i lkinda like the plot idea, HOWEVER, i don't understand the relationship between inuyasha and kagoame, it doesn't make sense, behaviorley, if some guy was holding me to be his slave i certainly would be in love with him, nor even like him, at least not right away, and same for inuyasha, he fell for her to quickley, it wasnt natural, if youjust built their relationship a little slower, and gave it more tiem to develope, your story would be excellent! he needs to treat her with a little kindness, seeing her suffer, even though she mostly rebukes this kindness, and then ever so slwely they need to start likeing each other. that is my only problem with your story, its quite good except for that. i kept getting confused by their actions, cause as i said, they seemed unnatural. if you worked on that, i would give you a 4 star, if not 5 star review! hope you dont take offense, im just going for some constructive critisism, and mean no harm. i hope you do take my advice thoug, cause i really want to give your story 5 strts, but like i said i kept getting cnfused by their behavior.

umm well it was verey.verey intresting,& it's getting sad,& it's verey suprising,Update soon.& try to leave the woman abouse to a minamum.Raising a hand against a woman....Something about that is not quite abnerable.








or at least i think thats how you spell it ^_^