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for Captured

by DarkLove

person Spiders
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Reveiws* Great job!
person D.I.
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM

AHHH!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFY! it's so good! plz update or i'll dieeeeeeee =) great job! keep up the good work!
person chanda
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon...

Thanx
chanda
person Kogas Hentai Luver (too lazy to log in)
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really damn interesting. I found myself glued to each chapter. Can't wait for what's coming next. Inu gettin some, oh yeah!!!!!
person chanda
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I bet Naraku is going to be mad his toy ran away, only to be captured by another... God I love stories like this...LOL


Look forward towards your update,

Chanda
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story. i love how kagome defies naraku and inuyasha.
person XYZ
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. An intersting twist... Most stories I've read occurs when youkasi/hanyous are slaves of humans, but it's time Inuyasha gets to the master. Though I believe some more imagery and descriptions of the characters emotions would make this story better, and maybe longer chapters. Well, I'm looking forward to an update.
person Shadow Girl
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why you don't have any review yet, Maybe it's your summary? Either way, don't stop there because I want to know the rest. Maybe you could try to make your chapters longer? I'd like that a lot...^_^ I like your writing style, not a lot of mistakes and not a lot(if any) japanese words from what I could read!
Until the next chapter!^_~