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for Artificial Love

by TLia

person Rawben
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great start!! i just hope kagome isnt hurt by the ...outcome... ;)
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is interesting, well written - please update soon.
PD: you have an evil, evil mind... and I like it!!!!

VenusOfHeaven

(By the way, would you mind to read "hidden desire" and please mark my mistakes at spelling and grammar? I'm an Spanish gierl who has only studied English for a year ans a half, and people revising my writings would help)
Thanks
person TLia
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it cheating to review your own work?
oh well.
Yaaaaaaaay I have a review!!!!!