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for Artificial Love

by TLia

person Becca
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Miroku was pregnant and that the potion forced his slowly changing body to miscarry. What's going to happen now?
person Atocha
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far but the bit at the end...SO COOL!!!! Its so funny! Oh and you have the Dragons on your side. We want to see Kagome locked away in that closet for a long long time!
person Imortalitylost
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha and Miroku will end up together, but i have to warn you this fic will become very angsty soon. I want to start a vote. Who thinks I should let Kagome out of the closet. Review!
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But, although they find the cure, they will be together, don't they?
Hmmmm, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure it will be as interesting as this.
Bye!

VenusOfHeaven
person DemmaJ
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am all for the tutu...and maybe toss a little wolf boy in there and I will be set.
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niiiice.
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehehehahahahahahahahhuahuahhuahuahuahua
That final Author note was so funny!!
The story is addictiv, you know, so you better update before I leave you 30 rewiews, or something like that!!!
Seriously, interesting, interesting... I liked the lemon.

VenusOfHeaven
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know, I've just left you a rewiew, but... UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE NOW, please *insert cute puppy eyes*
your Spnaish reader, who always she can she'll left you a rewiew,
VenusOfHeaven
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Thanks for the rewiew. By the way, your story is getting more and more interesting, please keep on updating so soon!!!

VenusOfHeaven
person Dante
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"gargantuan" haha, that backpack does seem to be almost as big as Kagome sometimes. Good start.

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