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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what in hades fire coooooooome on finish the story its great plllllllease pretty pleeeease
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you! You are so funny and right there is no reason you for to have the explain why your character got pregnant,however I do like your explanation. "He was stolen by the fairies, sold on the black market to the aliens, who used him in their interstellar breeding kennel where he was promptly paired with Inuyasha who just happened to be there......."
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there stranger! Lovely chapter. You've done well, girl. Tied it all up nicely in a pink bow. You've put a lot of work into this story and it shows. Don't listen to morons who say it sucks. I know sucky and this is not it. Along with a genuine grasp of literary skills, you have a gift for wringing emotions out of your readers and yet making them laugh at the same time. Wonderful talent to have. Don't ever lose it.
By the way, your friend, the one who you recommended Unscripted to, has left me a fabulous review and since I don't know who the hell she is, can you tell her something for me? Tell her THANK YOU for the comments and that I have left her a reply just under her own review. Also tell her there is a HAPPY ENDING to Unscripted and I dearly want her to read it. Could you do that for me? Thanks, hun. You're the best! :) Keep on writing!
By the way, your friend, the one who you recommended Unscripted to, has left me a fabulous review and since I don't know who the hell she is, can you tell her something for me? Tell her THANK YOU for the comments and that I have left her a reply just under her own review. Also tell her there is a HAPPY ENDING to Unscripted and I dearly want her to read it. Could you do that for me? Thanks, hun. You're the best! :) Keep on writing!
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Damn nice work. It's a shame that it was posted in this time of reconstruction. If I were you, I'd repost when all the dust has settled and this site is back to having its usual full traffic. That way, you'd get more reviews. Anyhoo, I really liked the son Miroku. So so so cute :D. I really feel sorry for the mother, but, I think I see where this is going. *InuYasha takes care of kid and they live happily ever after...hopefully*
It would be cool if you continued this with Inuyasha taking care of the kid and make it like a comedy and even have Inuyasha dating or something. I dunno...just a dumb idea by me =/
It would be cool if you continued this with Inuyasha taking care of the kid and make it like a comedy and even have Inuyasha dating or something. I dunno...just a dumb idea by me =/
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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*SOB* ok- so i got that out of my system. Actually I think that was your best chapter so far- awesome writing style and good plot. I really like the kitsune and hope you'll expand on her some more. Keep up the good writing- and try not to blow Inuyasha up- I still need him to finish my story.
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February 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the weirdest story I've ever read....Throughout it all I was like, "i'm not gonna cry...you're not gonna cry" I didn't cry for the longest time. It's quite funny. But then, in the last two chapters I was bawling my eyes out!! The little comic you had at the end really helped!!!! xP I looove you!!!!!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to say this... but your story sucks.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still interesting reading. I don't want Miroku to stay dead - post another chapter soon, I don't know where you are going with this yet and I can't wait to find out. (I guess I didn't see the movie you stole your idea from. *grin*)
Also, your pre- and post- story banter is GREAT! I enjoy that almost as much as I'm enjoying the story.
Also, your pre- and post- story banter is GREAT! I enjoy that almost as much as I'm enjoying the story.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eee... I'm so addicted to this fic i swear!... mu haha... Love your work! Keep up the great job! ^_^
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this . . . and I have a problem with it.
It's a good story, don't get me wrong, and there were parts that were very sad (like Miroku's death) but the problem I have is Miroku getting pregnant.
You didn't sufficiently explain how he was able to get pregnant. No one asked how he, a HUMAN male with no female productive equipment, was able to become pregnant. Was it because of the potion? Was it because of Inuyasha's demon blood? What? Why was this able to happen when it shouldn't have even happened at all? (In my mind, Inuyasha is more likely to bear a child than Miroku BECAUSE of Inuyasha's demon nature, but that's in my mind. Or if Miroku does end up being the pregnant one, some other change needs to occur . . . like him becoming a half-demon or something. Something that explains why he can conceive.)
The story does have some potential but I can't get beyond Miroku being pregnant without some sort of questioning taking place or some change happening to the monk.
It's a good story, don't get me wrong, and there were parts that were very sad (like Miroku's death) but the problem I have is Miroku getting pregnant.
You didn't sufficiently explain how he was able to get pregnant. No one asked how he, a HUMAN male with no female productive equipment, was able to become pregnant. Was it because of the potion? Was it because of Inuyasha's demon blood? What? Why was this able to happen when it shouldn't have even happened at all? (In my mind, Inuyasha is more likely to bear a child than Miroku BECAUSE of Inuyasha's demon nature, but that's in my mind. Or if Miroku does end up being the pregnant one, some other change needs to occur . . . like him becoming a half-demon or something. Something that explains why he can conceive.)
The story does have some potential but I can't get beyond Miroku being pregnant without some sort of questioning taking place or some change happening to the monk.